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Sylvie
Author: Thomas Chaser
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(Added on Jan 8, 2005)
(This month 11872 readers) (Total 24362 readers) |
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A young woman, suspected to be a terrorist, is brought in for questioning. She's forced to watch as another woman undergoes the tortures she will endure if she refuses to cooperate. Will she surrender her secrets? |
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Weighed
Average (?):  (7.5/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Jan 19, 2007 |
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i love the way the whole story was put together (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
Curtis
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Jan 9, 2005 |
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I liked this one better than The Body donor. Very good start to a 'harder story than the other two you posted today. My only real complaint is that hemostats are clamps, not scissors. Since you used them properly, I wonder if mis-describing them was just a senior moment. (8/10)
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- Replied by:
skullchaser
(Edit) (Jan 9, 2005)
- I probably didn't convey the image properly regarding the hemo's. You're correct - they're clamps, but they're shaped much like scissors. I have a good idea of the direction this story will take, along with a plot twist along the way just to keep things interesting. I do plan on coming back to it and finishing it off (somehow). I'm just having a failure of imagination with it at the moment.
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| Reviewer:
longrover
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Jan 8, 2005 |
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A good setup for a longer story. The author writes well. (7/10)
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- Replied by:
skullchaser
(Edit) (Jan 8, 2005)
- Thank you! I intend to continue it out and add some plot twists, as well as some background to make it more believable. I plan to give the main character some depth and perhaps introduce another female player if I can decide on how to characterize her.
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