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Out Of Commission
Author: Adrian Hunter
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(Added on Jul 14, 2000)
(This month 11783 readers) (Total 30082 readers) |
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The story of a young woman who says she will do anything to make a sale, and a man who takes up her offer in ways she will never forget. |
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Weighed
Average (?):  (7.5/10) |
Average
Rating:  (8/10) |
Highest
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Lowest
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| Reviewer:
Barbara Anne
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Oct 23, 2002 |
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A little disappointing, given the potential for more descriptive prose. A reasonable attempt though. (6/10)
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| Reviewer:
BMaster
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Nov 28, 2001 |
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Surprising and fascinating ending!! (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
sindie |
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Mar 10, 2001 |
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wow and ow! (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
ABrunetteWoman |
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Aug 21, 2000 |
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I found the writing style and story content monotonous and boring. (2/10)
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| Reviewer:
fred |
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Aug 8, 2000 |
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decent keep you wating for a whipping/sex at the end BUT delivered (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
caroline farmer |
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Jul 20, 2000 |
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Verging on the non-consensual and titillating us all the more for it, this is Adrian Hunter, expert in the art of ropes and plugs, at his most wicked. Or best. I am yet to find another storyline that puts a celing fan to such perverted use. The only natural reaction after reading this is "more more more". And thank all deities, there is much more. (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
L. M. |
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Jul 14, 2000 |
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Not a bad story. Good descriptive sentances. Some grammatical/spelling errors. Good story! (8/10)
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