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A Reluctant Master
Author: Master13
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(Added on Jan 3, 2005)
(This month 22194 readers) (Total 39099 readers) |
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In the island kingdom of Cerna, nearly half of the female population are slaves. Some were born into slavery, others were enslaved for crimes, while still others were taken from foreign lands in slave raids. There are even some who chose the collar. Regardless of how they reached their status, these women must serve the whims of their masters and mistresses. For in the eyes of their society, they are merely valuable pieces of property. |
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| Reviewer:
cece3457
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Jul 4, 2008 |
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write more in this thread please (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
Satan_Klaus
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Aug 5, 2005 |
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Very good story. It's delightful to see a kind master with a firm believe in humanity for once.
The story is so well written that there is not much to criticize but I would suggest to replace:
"May I try on my new clothing now, Master?"
with
"Would you like me to try on my new clothes now, master?"
For an even more submissive feeling.
Satan_Klaus (9/10)
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mkemse
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Apr 24, 2005 |
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nicely done (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
Ruby
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Feb 20, 2005 |
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Just loved the story and the slave's antics. The characters were well written and very likeable. It was easy to visualize the story as well as experience it through the character's thoughts and actions. Would enjoy reading the ongoing adventures of this reluctant master and his willing slave. The writing style is wonderful. (9/10)
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mgmoore
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Jan 29, 2005 |
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Great story light hearted and not overdone. The charecters were concistent and believable in that happily ever after kind of way. (9/10)
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babe_rdp
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Jan 11, 2005 |
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Loved this story, well written, fun and not overblown!! Loved the characters and the attemps by the slave to get through to her new Master!! (9/10)
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longrover
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Jan 8, 2005 |
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A well-written, pleasant story. The niece is a nice touch; perhaps she will reappear? (9/10)
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hkushner
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Jan 7, 2005 |
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Very consistant and not overdone. (9/10)
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sarijak02
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Jan 5, 2005 |
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Wonderful story. Well written, nice characters, liked the slave's attempts to seduce her reluctant master. Any plans for more stories using the same characters or in the same world? (9/10)
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