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The Veterinarian
Author: Evil Misstress
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(Added on Dec 29, 2004)
(This month 24651 readers) (Total 51549 readers) |
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A Doctor's assistant and friend takes her boyfriend but then must take the consequences for her actions.both become transformed sexslaves. |
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Average (?):  (6/10) |
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| Reviewer:
crickette
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Apr 26, 2005 |
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Prety good story. Talk about getting what you deserve. Best poetic justice I have seen in a long time, real or fictional. Loved the no nonsense attitude of the lead character. The pace was steady, it never dragged. And they did get what they obviously wanted....each other. (smirk) (7/10)
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redEva
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Jan 2, 2005 |
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like Malice and petlelah i had high hopes, but even though the idea is good, the story seems rushed, not enough development and not smooth enough. Thank you for sharing, keep trying it gets better with practice! (5/10)
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| Reviewer:
Malice
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Jan 2, 2005 |
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The premise was up my alley, the execution on the other then left something to be desired. I wasn't really sure why she decides to pierce her clit and nipples, there really isn't any allowing the plot to fall into place slowly. It all comes as kinda a rushed and basic setup for a fantasy.
It could use more detail, and perhaps having the pace slowed down a few notches would help aswell. In the end though, good concepts and idea's. (6/10)
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petleah
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Dec 31, 2004 |
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I'm partial to any stories involving human transformation and petslaves, so you get bonus points right off the bat. The plot was good even though I would have liked more detail. I'd love to see another chapter or two, perhaps dealing with the birth of Muffy's and/or Bobby's puppies. (8/10)
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bisarah
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Dec 29, 2004 |
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Well, the idea behind the story is really good. That being said, your writing style needs a lot of improvement. If English isn't your first language, you need to get a good dictionary so you will know the difference between words like "new" and "knew." Please keep writing and sharing your improved works. (5/10)
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