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Starving for Love
Author: CRUDEDUDE
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(Added on Nov 28, 2004)
(This month 57713 readers) (Total 83953 readers) |
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A very submissive woman draws on past lessons and strives to be a better slave. |
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Average (?):  (7/10) |
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| Reviewer:
pollycoventry
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Jun 8, 2007 |
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love when a girl understands sex (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
Mothbrad
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Dec 10, 2006 |
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The writer has a particular style which I think is giong to turn as many people off as it does turn them on. Very un-PC, but certainly for those women who enjoy the fantasy of complete submission and self-degredation (not to mention the men who enjoy that too ...) (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
badcatholicgirl
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Aug 11, 2006 |
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quite enjoyable, I can put myself in the story, good not as good as "perfect guy" but still good, I wish you would write more (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
mwatt495
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Dec 30, 2004 |
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If you love women with complete lack of respect for themsleves you will love this (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
chksng19
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Nov 28, 2004 |
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Well, fair bisarah has already discussed spell checking and the use of correct words. I'll throw in punctuation (like quotation marks, for example): stories are communication --- if they aren't clear, they don't communicate. Your readers shouldn't have to struggle to understand.
The story didn't seem erotic to me. Just abusive, and overly so. In the real world, her bosses would have called the cops over her injuries, her injuries and privations would make it impossible for her to work in such a difficult job, and she'd be in the hospital being treated for exhaustion.
But this is fiction, after all, right? (3/10)
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| Reviewer:
bobanddianne
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Nov 28, 2004 |
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A wonderful story that mixes the erotic side of abuse into an excellent package. When some typo errors are corrected it will be superb. (9/10)
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bisarah
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Nov 28, 2004 |
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i think this author is very confused about the difference between submission and abuse. i also think he (?) needs to learn how to proof read his work and not depend on spell check to catch his errors, i.e. too, not to or ass not as. (2/10)
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