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I Blame Lara Croft
Author: The Qmoq
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(Added on Nov 14, 2004)
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An Angelina Jolie quote is used to spark a whole lifestyle change for me and my office colleague, Alyson. For one night, she agrees to let me have all control over her, and quickly finds herself out of her depth... |
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Average (?):  (8/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
subbunny
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Jul 22, 2005 |
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I'm never eating M&M's again
But otherwise i really liked the story (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
longrover
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Nov 15, 2004 |
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The story is well planned and well written, fun to read. The last image Alyson offered was splendid. Thanks! (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
GaryWilcox
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Nov 14, 2004 |
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I think most stories are too damn short and not detailed enough. But the meat of this story is very satisfying. Excellent, looking forward to a serial. (8/10)
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- Replied by:
Qmoq
(Edit) (Nov 15, 2004)
- Many thanks for your review, Gary. Unfortunately I don't plan on this story being a serial - I usually prefer to write stories from the sub's point of view. But any positive review is very inspiring - thanks.
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| Reviewer:
spike
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Nov 14, 2004 |
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Nice title. Quite a nice session, though with some anatomical improbabilities. But we don't get any idea of why he thinks she will be amenable to the particular humiliations he chooses, especially as he says they aren't his fetishes either. (7/10)
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- Replied by:
Qmoq
(Edit) (Nov 15, 2004)
- Hi Spike, thanks for your review. One of the ideas of the story was to have a semi-reluctant, very inexperienced but imaginative dom, with no idea why Alyson wants to be a slave, so that part was intentional. However, the improbabilities were unintentional - sometimes I guess I just get carried away! Thanks again for the review.
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