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Come Agian Another Day
Author: Frances LaGatta
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(Added on Nov 9, 2004)
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Student, Hope, has high hopes for her professor. But doing archeological field work together becomes steamier than the jungle hot springs. |
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Average (?):  (6.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Feb 16, 2006 |
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altho i enjoyed the story i did not find anythin of shock value in it, meaninig something that really kicked be over or that said to me wowo, what an idea, buti did really enjoy the post (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
rce
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Nov 13, 2004 |
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As has been said, the beginning is not good. The reader is plunged into a story without much of a description of the characters or even how they look. Nevertheless, it turns out to be a good story. (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
pippa
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Nov 12, 2004 |
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I had mixed feelings about this story. It seemed to plunge right in and refer to prior events that the reader had no idea of. If it was taken from a novel you are writing then that probably explains it. I liked lots of the descriptions of mixed emotions etc. but I felt it hard to "connect" with either of the two characters. By that I mean I didnt really believe them which is a shame because I wanted to. Perhaps just 1 Chapter isnt enough?- (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
Dürrer
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Nov 12, 2004 |
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(4/10)
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- Replied by:
Frances LaGatta
(Edit) (Nov 12, 2004)
- Durrer. . . a mystery man or woman of few words. Don't yah just love the strong and silent type? LOL. (I'm so bad. But bratting is so much fun, ahay subbies?)
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| Reviewer:
chksng19
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Nov 11, 2004 |
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Not a bad story, but needs more classification. Rom, oral, reluctant come to mind.
Willl this be continued here, or is it just an ad? (7/10)
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- Replied by:
Frances LaGatta
(Edit) (Nov 12, 2004)
- I goofed on the codes during submission. Sometimes that happens when you're cross-eyed from writing and it's late. I agree D/s, oral, amoung others should've been added. . .reluctant is often iffy.
This current scene is from a novel I've been working on, on and off, for eight years. Yet, oft times excerpts can make decent short stories.
This story is in NO way shape or form an ad! I may be aquistions editor for Wicked Velvet, but I'm first and foremost a writer myself who finds feedback, good or bad, just as gratifing and useful as the rest of you passionate pens.
Thank you knidly for yours.
Frances
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