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Abigail's Ordeal
Author: Rebel Snowdrop
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(Added on Nov 3, 2004)
(This month 30835 readers) (Total 65139 readers) |
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This is the tale of the girl who appeared in the video shown to Jennifer in my story "Fate of a Murderess". It tells of how Abigail, an inexperienced American journalist, falls foul of the brutal African dictatorship where she was reporting. |
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Weighed
Average (?):  (7/10) |
Average
Rating:  (7.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
CrazedDog
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Feb 16, 2009 |
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Seemed a bit limited but enjoyable (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Nov 4, 2004 |
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i found it an enjoyable reading experience (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
chksng19
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Nov 4, 2004 |
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An intense but very well done story, other than a few impossible things (i.e. if a woman's breasts are caned over 50 times as stated in the story, there is NO WAY there would be no bruising in 24 hours).
The last bit, from the end of the nailing to the end of the story, seems a bit rushed. That could, without disturbing the reader who is hooked by that point, be drawn out some. Perhaps a scene with the Dictator, rather than just telling of it?
A good story. I just wish it wasn't over already! (8/10)
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