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Average (?):  (8.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
azrlg17
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Oct 31, 2006 |
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Very hot sex. I didn't like the scene with the glass shards. I'm not sure if you really hurt yourself if you lightly scrape over some loose shards. But I'm very sure that you can severly hurt yourself if you collapse on it.
My main problem with this story is the completely unrealistic setup. Maybe this girls mother didn't report the social workers. Maybe this girl was too shy to go to the police or a teacher or whatever. But the story implies they did this a lot of times. Only a question of time and one girl or a parent would fight back. And then another and another so even if they could hush the first one up someone as stupid as that would end up in jail real fast. And what do they do with the girls when a parent asks to see them during the treatment? I know they said you can't but if a parent is stubborn enough they would have a real problem.
Suspension of disbelief only goes so far and these holes kinda ruin it for me. (6/10)
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| Reviewer:
Ashtree
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Jan 27, 2006 |
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Really good stuff, very well developed story line (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
Dododecapod
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May 25, 2005 |
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This is very good. Sadistic "social workers", submission and torture of the hapless victim - nothing bad in the plot!
A few spelling errors, and what I would consider poor word choices sullied things just a little. This may seem to be quibbling, but such things really do detract from my enjoyment of the story, and they're so easy to remove.
I'll be looking out for the continuation of this story. (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
Breannefun
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Nov 10, 2004 |
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To be perfectly honest, I usually find Powerone's work to be...choppy would be the best word. It's always good fiction, but there is usually not that buildup or foreshadowing I prefer. However, this piece is the exception. This pieces is wonderful! I loved the way Missy's emotions were explored. It made the difference along with the gradual build up in intensity. This is easily Powerone's greatest work. (10/10)
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mkemse
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Nov 3, 2004 |
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You never let anyone down, great story, great everything (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
bisarah
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Nov 3, 2004 |
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a nicely written story ... good character development and ... it made me wet!! More, please? (9/10)
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chksng19
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Nov 3, 2004 |
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Anxious for the next chapter. Good story, believable foundation for it to build on. I would like to be a fly on the wall in this one!
What was the quote in the Forum? "If you want to cum read Powerone." (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
george Weston
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Nov 3, 2004 |
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your story is great...like the way the two women are playing on the young girl's fear of authority...keep it up... (8/10)
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