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A Mother's Submission 2
Author: george weston
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(Added on Oct 27, 2004)
(This month 94574 readers) (Total 214327 readers) |
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This is a continuation of Diane's travel on the road to self awareness and fulfillment...and much more. The story continues with the original cast of characters and resumes the tale at the last eposide of A Mother's Submission. |
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Odinxxx
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May 28, 2006 |
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One of the best stories I've ever read! (10/10)
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XEQtor
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Jan 24, 2006 |
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Very seldom do I find another writer continuing an original author's take and making it grow so much bigger than what the originator has done, and staying faithful to his writing style and intentions. Although the story still has legs, George's efforts get my full vote! I just wish/hope that updates can be more frequent. (10/10)
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BigCat
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Jul 22, 2005 |
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Really well done in terms of pacing and development. Humiliation involved in role reversal with daughter great erotica. Am personally put off by the detailed "cow/calfing" theme, which is why i could onoy give it a 9, but am interested in reading other works of yours. Good stuff. Thanks. (9/10)
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mlbryant
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Nov 16, 2004 |
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A different story from the original story, but much more intense. (9/10)
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Mobius
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Nov 12, 2004 |
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I Loved it under the first auther. Still love it. There is so much promice here. You have hinted that she is preparing her cows and calfs to be bread and sold. KEEP GOING. (9/10)
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jdsaunders01
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Nov 3, 2004 |
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Quite good. The seed of a great story. (8/10)
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chksng19
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Nov 3, 2004 |
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Interesting story of submission, looking hard at the mother's love for her daughter overcome by her love for humiliation and being degraded. A little unreal, I think, in the changes which overcome the little girl, but that's poetic license, I guess.
Very well done so far! (8/10)
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mkemse
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Oct 27, 2004 |
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It has the begginings of a great story, i will change my rating and review as more chapters are posted and have a better idea where you are going (7/10)
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