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Memoirs of a Slave Girl
Author: Rocky
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(Added on Sep 25, 2004)
(This month 122490 readers) (Total 175904 readers) |
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A woman reflects back on her 70+ years as a slave. This story will probably include a little bit of everything, so don't limit your interest if your favorite codes aren't listed. |
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Average (?):  (8.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
Dred Tory
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Jul 14, 2012 |
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Excellent work of erotic fiction. (10/10)
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Mright
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Dec 29, 2011 |
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This is a truly good story. Not so much sexually but I would say it is far better than many famous books. A true piece of literature (10/10)
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anotniceguy
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Jul 22, 2005 |
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unusually convincing. some reality with plenty of perversion. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
Rocky
(Edit) (Jul 22, 2005)
- Thanks. I strive for a semblance of reality, even in fantasy.
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| Reviewer:
pejanon
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Jul 13, 2005 |
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On-of-kind gem! It actually covers 70 years long life. AND it does contain almost everything. AND it comes naturally. AND it is not contrived at all. AND it is even romantic. AND great ending. AND small bits of (political?) fantasy (now, about that college with slave keeping facilities ... where exactly? <grin>) are witty and make the story more convicting. AND it's a great stroke story (even if 'she' thinks it is not!)
Yep, this is IT!
Years? Oh come on. Let the story write itself, forget endless tuch-ups and post! You're just too good!
(10/10)
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- Replied by:
Rocky
(Edit) (Jul 10, 2005)
- Well, as my main chacter would have said, your enjoyment was the only important factor. That said, thank you so much for the kind words; encouragement of this sort is what I need to keep writing. I might now even look at some other stories I've started, but never completed. Hopefully, I'll even get them finished in a year or two!
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mkemse
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Apr 30, 2005 |
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nice to see a story from the slaves view for a change (9/10)
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- Replied by:
Rocky
(Edit) (May 29, 2005)
- Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
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WackySpurtz
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Oct 24, 2004 |
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Started with Part 8. Honestly, I just don't find anything erotic about giving a 71 year old woman a cold enema, and the other abuses described. What's with this sort of writing, anyway? (3/10)
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- Replied by:
Rocky
(Edit) (Oct 24, 2004)
- My suggestion is that you go back and read it from the beginning. Chapter 8 was undoubtedly the harshest, most abusive of the story, and was not meant to be particularly erotic. I can see why you wouldn't like it if it was the first chapter you read.
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| Reviewer:
chksng19
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Oct 23, 2004 |
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A very good start, and I look forward to further chapters.
This story feels as though it was written by a woman. There's a difference in the way the story feels: if Rocky is a guy, Good Job!
As Lex mentions, several concerns with proofing, especially in the first chapter. A little heavy in the use of elipses (....) as well: they should be used rarely. (Sister Mary Holywater told me that excessive use was the sign of poor thinking processes. Don't know if it's true, but it broke me of the habit. And saved my suffering knuckles a few ruler swats (grin).)
Oh,yeah, almost forgot. No duct tape was available for civilians until well after WWII; you might want to change that about using it in 1936.
A wonderful ending: the last chapter was a truly refreshing ending for a slave story (a moral lesson for humanity? Nah, they'd never get it). Excellent job, Rocky.
(9/10)
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- Replied by:
Rocky
(Edit) (Sep 28, 2004)
- Yes, Rocky is a him...(oops...there goes the elipses again <g>)...which is making the project quite an endeavor. Re: elipses, I 'll keep that in mind, but as I recall, they were used primarily when she was reflecting her (often disjointed) thoughts. As to the duct tape, perhaps her memory was faulty? Could also have been that her owner managed to obtain some through his position as an OSS executive. While I didn't specifically identify his employer, there were a couple of hints.
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| Reviewer:
mlbryant
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Oct 20, 2004 |
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I found this story to be entertaining as well as thought provoking. The point of view of the narator as looking back over a long life experience is not one that I previously encountered. Very enjoyable! (9/10)
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- Replied by:
Rocky
(Edit) (Oct 21, 2004)
- Thanks for the comments, and I'm glad you enjoyed it. I don't know if I have another story in me...as I said in a previous response, I haven't been able to think up anything all that original, so try to put new spins on old ideas. Be assured, if I do come up with anything, it will be posted on this site!
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Breannefun
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Oct 5, 2004 |
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I'm not much into slavery, but this was a deeply erotic story. Not because of any certain subsequent retold memory, but because she told it in such a vivid, PERSONAL fashion. This wasn't just a story...it was someone's life. Of course, I know it's fiction and Rocky is a guy, but hey, an incredible job. (8/10)
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LordVetinari
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Sep 29, 2004 |
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An interesting beginning. I do so hope the author continues to write this. While the premise has been done before, this author's take on it is entertaining. I am looking forward to seeing where it goes next. (7/10)
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- Replied by:
Rocky
(Edit) (Sep 29, 2004)
- I have to admit that I'm not very original, so try to put new spins on old ideas. Thanks for the kind comments, and hope you do enjoy future installments.
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mstrger
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Sep 27, 2004 |
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Excellent first 2 chapters. Hope theres a few more shortly (9/10)
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- Replied by:
Rocky
(Edit) (Sep 28, 2004)
- Working on it! The entire story is pretty much drafted, but I'm not all that pleased with how implausible some of the chapters are. The ending, however, is complete, so all I have left to do are the intervening fifty or so years!
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lex ludite
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Sep 26, 2004 |
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The concept is a good one, history as seen through the eyes of a slave, but I wonder on which world this one has been set. Personally I find the idea of slavery to be quite depressing, despite the main character's arguements to the contrary. The editing indeed could have been better. I find missing words and the like to be distractions that get in the way of enjoying the story. I probably will part company with this effort at this point, but I do recommend it strongly to those interested in this genre. (7/10)
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- Replied by:
Rocky
(Edit) (Sep 26, 2004)
- Sorry about any missing words...the story was written partly on a PC, partly on a PDA, and though I tried to proof-read, I did notice some errors as a result of the cut-and-paste process which I thought I'd corrected prior to posting.
With regard to the general premise not being your cup of tea...we all have different likes and dislikes, which is part of what makes the world such an interesting place. I do appreciate the fact that you do strongly recommend it to those who have an interest, though.
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a60611
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Sep 25, 2004 |
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Great story. Sexy slaveworld. Great submissive attitude - she exists to aid her owners. (9/10)
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