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Surprise Party
Author: Coyote
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(Added on Sep 15, 2004)
(This month 45645 readers) (Total 88586 readers) |
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Woman and her 14 year old daughter are kidnapped and taken to a farmhouse by 4 men and 2 young boys for lots of fun and games. |
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Weighed
Average (?):  (7.5/10) |
Average
Rating:  (8/10) |
Highest
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| Reviewer:
neededcritic
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Jul 26, 2016 |
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Story has been removed leaving only the title page and the ads. (1/10)
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| Reviewer:
hfdf
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Jun 3, 2010 |
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Highly enjoyable. I like the way the author slowly moves from each humiliation to a slightly worse humiliation. The timing is excellent. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Oct 4, 2004 |
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wow, love the theme, the premise and everything about the story, love mother/daughter stories (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
Nitrofox
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Sep 15, 2004 |
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This story is very good. I would rank it up there with "Captured Family". I have but one complaint, and it is a minor one, given the overall quality of the work. I think the childish language is a little overdone. If it were toned down a little, I think the story would be much improved. I am also glad to see an author use proper paragraphing. Good work! (9/10)
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- Replied by:
coyote
(Edit) (Sep 16, 2004)
- Thanks so much for your rating of Surprise Party. So glad you enjoyed it. As far as the childish language is concerned, I had planned to tone it down as you suggested but many readers seem to enjoy it as it adds to the victims humiliation.
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| Reviewer:
woolfighter
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Sep 15, 2004 |
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Coyote I'm glad to see you again. All your work is excellent and this one is no exception. Hoping to read more from you... (10/10)
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