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A Working Day
Author: Abe Froman
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(Added on Sep 15, 2004)
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A day at the office for a power broker with a unique relationship with his secretary. |
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Average (?):  (8.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
Rushgirl302003
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May 19, 2016 |
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Really getting the switch in me ready for some topping! (10/10)
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ck10019
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Mar 30, 2008 |
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Great work! I just think the introduction was written in a rush...and not as well formed as I liked. The ending was absolutely delicious! (8/10)
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trainmanretep
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Apr 12, 2006 |
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quite nice lead in into the story. Also the mystery guest is a nice touch. Looking forward to further chapters (9/10)
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seatonstomb
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Mar 5, 2006 |
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The story is written well with some good action (8/10)
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ropebinder
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Apr 21, 2005 |
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When I read erotica, I want erotica. Set up, character development, imagery and predicaments are wonderful backdrops to pornography, but I want action. It can be fastpaced or slow and draining, but I wish more people would have the courage to write about sexuality and sex. This story is very well written, and I implore Abe to take on the challenge of describing exactly what happens, from fingertips to penis. Thank you for a nice story. (8/10)
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oddball
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Dec 5, 2004 |
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Great! I want more! (9/10)
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bracemaiden
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Oct 10, 2004 |
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Much as I usually hate the "boss gets domm'ed by the secretary" stories, this one was very well done! They story kept moving, and the mystery guest at the end was exciting. Someone around the office? Who knows? (10/10)
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benstrap
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Sep 20, 2004 |
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I did love this story. The mystery guest is a wonderful twist and has lots of potential for more chapters to come. The story did turn me on. Thanks. (9/10)
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slaveneedledick
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Sep 15, 2004 |
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i must agree with trainman. Excellent lead into the story and who is the mystery guest is it the the driver or someone else...Enquiring minds want to know.... (8/10)
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