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Without a Sound
Author: Dee Driscoll
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(Added on Sep 11, 2004)
(This month 13014 readers) (Total 30034 readers) |
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Mature woman is raped by her son's teenage friend. It all happens in her kitchen, on the floor, from the back. There are other cliches featured as well, the story was written as a gift to a real life person and not originally intended for public viewing, er, otherwise I might have tried to avoid certain stereotypes. Then again, maybe not. It is short, humiliating and unpleasant. |
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Average (?):  (8/10) |
Average
Rating:  (8.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
darkavenger
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Apr 29, 2006 |
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Short but potent rape story. What the rapist told the victim really made it first class humiliation. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
Dee Driscoll
(Edit) (Apr 30, 2006)
- Thanks a lot. Unfortunately, the more time passes, the less I am pleased with this one... It was written in one short burst of typing and it shows... Too clumsy and cliched... Still, glad you liked it.
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| Reviewer:
C_Lakewood
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Sep 14, 2004 |
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Well done -- though there were a number of
minor grammatical mistakes. (8/10)
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- Replied by:
Dee Driscoll
(Edit) (Sep 14, 2004)
- Yes, unfortunately, I noticed those only after posting the story. And to think I actually did all the necessary re-reading and editing to make sure this doesn't happen. That comes from not being a native English speaker I guess. Will try harder in future, thank you.
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Sep 13, 2004 |
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no weak links i could find, i hope there is either more of this story to come or more like it (9/10)
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- Replied by:
Dee Driscoll
(Edit) (Sep 14, 2004)
- Thank you for the review. Hmm, yes, there will be more of it, I can say that for sure now. In a short while.
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| Reviewer:
Eden's Girl
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Sep 13, 2004 |
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Hey, I really quite enjoyed this story, especially the way the boy keeps telling the woman what she likes, over and over again - a nice touch. (8/10)
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- Replied by:
Dee Driscoll
(Edit) (Sep 13, 2004)
- Thank you for the review Eden's Girl. Yeah, I think the woman liked it too. I may have to write a sequel actually, to expand on it a bit.
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