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Pretty Maids All in a Row
Author: C
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(Added on Aug 11, 2004)
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The capture, and punishment, of five pretty witches. |
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| Reviewer:
Loki31
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Aug 27, 2004 |
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I agree more with the author on this one. An arousing, short read - ideal for getting your rocks off quickly! (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
Lord Thomas
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Aug 23, 2004 |
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Interesting idea, however, the story needed a lot of developement. Particuarilly character developement.
LT (5/10)
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- Replied by:
Comneno
(Edit) (Aug 24, 2004)
- Well, I understand your point, but I respectfully disagree. The goal of the story was nothing more than a certain sexual effect, and I wanted to get that effect across as economically as possible. Lengthy character development would, I think, have just gotten in the way. I may of course be totally wrong here; it wouldn't be the first time. At any event, I do appreciate your taking the time to read and critique my effort.
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