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The story of Angel, Master and I
Author: Josee Helie
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(Added on Aug 6, 2004)
(This month 17511 readers) (Total 32698 readers) |
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Angel and I meet for fun, I forget the date i have with my Master and get punished for it. We end up in a bdsm threesome. |
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Average (?):  (5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Sep 1, 2008 |
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good story but it needs work like Lex said (5/10)
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| Reviewer:
lex ludite
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Aug 8, 2004 |
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This little tale would have benefited a great deal from better editing. The random use of capitalization and the flawed use of tense in many spots made reading this a trying experience. At times I was not sure exactly how many people were abusing the heroine, or assisting her master. I would like to see a revised version that incorporated some or all of these suggestions; it probably would be very enjoyable to read. (5/10)
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