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The Lesson
Author: Elizabeth Fulton
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(Added on Jul 30, 2004)
(This month 9940 readers) (Total 20451 readers) |
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A submissive learns a valuable lesson about dominance. |
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Average (?):  (7/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
BigCat
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Aug 3, 2005 |
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Interesting switch. Perceptive. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
Alex Bragi
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Jul 30, 2004 |
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I think this piece would have worked better with more detail. Let’s face it, that’s what most readers here want - hot and juicy detailed descriptions of the characters and the sex. I like to pick up little hints about what the characters look like, and what is going in their heads, as well as their bodies, as I read. I think all readers do. Her thoughts and feeling were made clear, but what about his? His character, to me, felt rather one-dimensional.
A couple of times things read oddly to me. E.g. ‘Her imagination put his cock in her mouth…’ A ‘can’t that I think should have been a ‘couldn’t’ kind of jarred me also. It may have been the author’s way of reinforcing ‘her’ dominance, but for me I felt there were too many sentences beginning with ‘she’. She who must be obeyed… *s
Overall, though, I thought it was an enjoyable read.
(7/10)
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| Reviewer:
crickette
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Jul 30, 2004 |
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I really loved reading The Lesson. I especialy liked the non-chalant, matter-of-fact way he showed her who was dominant.The story was always moving but not to busy. Just enough to keep you interested. Your description of him along with his attitude and his responses made him seem incredibly hot ! I look forward to reading more of your work. Maybe you can write a part II. She may get the stones to try it again and it would definately be worth the price of admission to see his reaction ! (7/10)
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