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His little Dove
Author: steve_4373
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(Added on Jul 30, 2004)
(This month 57313 readers) (Total 82030 readers) |
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A romantic story about a Master and His girl, His little Dove. |
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Average (?):  (8/10) |
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| Reviewer:
BeautifulOblivion
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Aug 1, 2006 |
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Amazing. I absolutely loved it. The author kept me glued to the screen and I still want more. It was compelling and romantic. You can really feel the emotions. I honestly think this is one of my favorite pieces of that I've ever had the pleasure of reading.
Bravo! (9/10)
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jbowler65
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May 10, 2005 |
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Very well written. It allows the reader to learn about the couple and their exploration together. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
His damnit
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Aug 3, 2004 |
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I am enthralled by the journey protrayed here. So often stories are written with little realism and portray Dominants as unfeeling, heartless bastards. The emotions, regrets, memories and tribute to the beauty of a submissive's journey from a Dominant's point of view are simply wonderful. Please, do continue to write more. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
Alex Bragi
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Aug 2, 2004 |
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I like this story, it’s sensual and sexy – domination from a gentle master's point of view I guess.
I spotted a couple of minor problems as I read, but nothing too drastic to skim over. The author has an odd habit it repeating the same words too closely. It’s not huge problem at all, but did make this otherwise smooth read feel slightly cluttered. (I find when the words repeated at the start of a sentence, they can add impact, but not otherwise.) A few times the same character’s dialog was in the same paragraph, and while that’s not a huge hiccup either, it just makes it easy to follow if each is given a fresh line.
Readers seeking page after page of raunchy romping, agonizing torture and flagellation should probably skip this one. Overall, the synopsis says it all.
(8/10)
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