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My Roomate
Author: Ninja Turtle
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(Added on Jul 30, 2004)
(This month 43579 readers) (Total 88985 readers) |
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Two female freshmen roomates at college. One comes from a very conservative background and feels guilty when she masturbates. The other turns her into her toy using the guilt of her masturbating. |
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Average (?):  (8.5/10) |
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Dryhill
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Jun 27, 2010 |
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Spelling and grammatical errors, but they do not distract from the story. More about these two please. (9/10)
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studmaster58
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Oct 6, 2008 |
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A well written short story with a kinky, though realistic premise, very arousing..... (10/10)
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BigCat
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Aug 27, 2005 |
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Cute! Good actually. More? (9/10)
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quagmirething
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Aug 9, 2005 |
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Sexual frustration and confusion, for each of the characters, doubly fun. Short stories don't usually work for me, here I felt it meant the bondage was introduced too early and worked without complication. But a delicious morsel none the less. (8/10)
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cyrano_II
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Aug 4, 2005 |
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I love this story.. a wonderful buildup and so graphic both in the physical detail and in the psychology of the girls ínvolved. Please write more of this! (9/10)
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sub_for_you
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Jun 1, 2005 |
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Very sweet and very hot! I wish I had a roommate like that in college, that would punish me for being a slut. The spanking scenes were nice. I would like more chapters and be able to see these two take it much farther! (8/10)
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ropebinder
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Apr 6, 2005 |
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Ninja Turtle presents an excellent depiction of two freshman roomates away from home for the first time. Their struggle with lesbianism reads like nonfiction, which makes the story interesting. The dialogue is cute, sexy and realistic, but the innervoice of the heroine, Nicole, is even better. Their budding dominant/submissive relationship feels natural.
I wish the story were longer and more developed. The author appears qualified to articulate the further relationship of two girls both ashamed and excited about their newfound sexuality.
Well written and a great read. Thank you! (8/10)
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Yoru
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Dec 1, 2004 |
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Hoping to see more... (10/10)
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redEva
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Aug 2, 2004 |
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There is only one author whose stories codes I are irrelevant and that is You! It was over a year since you posted and I was sad, thinking you deserted us. Thank you for coming back and … superb as usual, your stories are delight to read. My personal preference and reason for enjoying them so much is your ability of making victims so miserable, and working them slowly into bad to worse situations. However, after I read the story I did check the codes, and … it came short of promised … so I just assume there is more to come! Looking forward to it!
Suggestion; have someone proofread it before posting, some really unnecessary typos could be easily avoided that way
(9/10)
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SirHenry
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Aug 2, 2004 |
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Excellent and enjoyable to read indeed. Hardly can wait for next chapters. I even had to take a brake while reading to cool me off. (9/10)
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robert216
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Aug 1, 2004 |
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for some reason I really liked this story. I hope there are more chapters to come! (9/10)
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Soft_Touch
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Aug 1, 2004 |
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Enjoying in very much. Didn't lose interest even once. (9/10)
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LoKi Kat
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Aug 1, 2004 |
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You know, there were a bit of grammatical mistakes and such, but, that was easily overlooked. IMO, the story was very good, realistic(atleast moreso than alot of these stories), and well, made me quit 'restless'. It is now one of my favored to masturbate too LOL... but then again, I tend to like the whole 'being punished' storyline, instead of asking for pain just for the sake of it. Very arousing story, thank you. (8/10)
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BlackRad!sh
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Aug 1, 2004 |
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This story has me squirming in my seat! Great premise, great style...please give me more! (10/10)
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Mobius
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Jul 31, 2004 |
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Very good start to nice story. Maybe a little to consensual. I dont see to many cristin conservitives beging to be spanked. Like that would realy happen. But keep writing I will keep reading. (7/10)
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Wmnwholves
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Jul 31, 2004 |
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I enjoyed the flow of the story. Great exploration of DS feelings. Hope that you continue this story with more chapters as they both explore their feelings. (8/10)
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S_Couture
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Jul 31, 2004 |
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Great fucking story. One of two that I have found enjoyable that were posted here in the last four months. (9/10)
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jbowler65
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Jul 30, 2004 |
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A good beginning to a story. We hope to see where it goes from here. (8/10)
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- Replied by:
Tigger 7 30 04
(Edit) (Oct 24, 2004)
- Agree with You liked it and can't wait to see what unfolds.
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funtime37
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Jul 30, 2004 |
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i really like the layout of the story and the first person narative was very good. hope to read more chapters. (8/10)
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mkemse
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Jul 30, 2004 |
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I realy like what you have written so far, the roommate control issue is great, i am waiting to see where you go from here (7/10)
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crickette
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Jul 30, 2004 |
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I thought My Roommate was pretty good. I felt kind of sorry for the conservative roommate. Her parents had realy done a job on him. I really enjoyed watching the other roommate squirm when she begin to realize that she may like females a little more than she bargained for.
The story itself could have been longer. It would be interesting to see just how things developed. Who knows the tables may turn. Over all, it was pretty well written and had a descent flow. Any chance of getting a part II ? (6/10)
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