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Author: Lord Douche
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(Added on Jul 23, 2004)
(This month 16815 readers) (Total 42921 readers) |
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The sea was full of jellyfish, and the other girls were boring. Finding the master key to the toilet block was the highlight in an otherwise boring holiday for young Chelsea. She had seen the damage the vandals had done to the strange building, damage that slowly fed her secret, exhibitionistic fantasies. Tonight would be the night?she would do it! |
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Average (?):  (9/10) |
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| Reviewer:
SamCurious
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Jun 4, 2011 |
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nasty twist in the tale lol. made good reading. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Jan 22, 2009 |
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Truly appreciated this little gem. It's not often one encounters such a short, where different genres meet in such harmony. Very well done!
JJ (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
bobby44
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Dec 17, 2006 |
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Not my interest (6/10)
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- Replied by:
Lord Douche
(Edit) (Dec 18, 2006)
- Thank you for that review. No, really, thanks. So helpful!
If it's a story you're not interested in, why did you review it in the first place and degrade the reviewing system for everyone?
LD
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| Reviewer:
SexyGirl1234
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Nov 6, 2005 |
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I loved it! Hope to see more soon, Will she go talk to the other girl? Who else got the key? (10/10)
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- Replied by:
Lord Douche
(Edit) (Nov 6, 2005)
- Thanks for the review, SexyGirl! I don't plan on continuing the story, sorry. I think where it ends at the moment is perfect. Glad you liked it!
LD
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| Reviewer:
bracemaiden
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Jul 30, 2004 |
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I liked the writing style - I could feel the tension, the apprehension at getting caught. I thought the contaminated water thing was a bit hokey though. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
redEva
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Jul 29, 2004 |
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Very nice, great story line, great style... you know i love your stories :) (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
Dododecapod
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Jul 26, 2004 |
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Loved it. An expanded version would be interesting, too. (10/10)
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- Replied by:
Lord Douche
(Edit) (Jul 28, 2004)
- Thanks for the review, Dododecapod. Not sure about an expanded version though :) Glad you liked it.
LD
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| Reviewer:
G-Bang99
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Jul 26, 2004 |
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Creative and artistic. Suspenseful with a nice twist ending. Would like to see a continuation. (10/10)
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- Replied by:
Lord Douche
(Edit) (Jul 28, 2004)
- Thanks for the review, G-Bang. I'm not really planning on a continuation, I'd prefer to leave it open like it is :)
LD
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