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The Hemingway Dialogue
Author: Natalie Nessus
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(Added on Jun 1, 2004)
(This month 10604 readers) (Total 18988 readers) |
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Two women, a winter Sunday in Paris, the conversation turns to Hemingway and a small wager. |
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Average (?):  (8.5/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Jan 24, 2009 |
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Did I say, poetry?
JJ (10/10)
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Dürrer
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Sep 27, 2004 |
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(8/10)
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Jun 8, 2004 |
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:) (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
soleil
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Jun 5, 2004 |
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The threads of subtle eroticism that weave through all of Natalie's works are often a welcome, refreshing change. I've been following Natalie Nessus' work for some years and, while this is very good, it was also written a couple of years ago. Natalie has certainly developed as a writer since then, as is evidenced by Sophia's Diary. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
Breannefun
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Jun 4, 2004 |
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I thought this story was light and entertaining, but lacked a lot in depth compared to the fluid writing style. I think the author is capable of a lot more in the area of detail and look forward to it. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
EstabanBacca
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Jun 3, 2004 |
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I enjoyed reading this piece.Your style is very fluid and the dialogue has a good rhythm. Your victim's character needs more deliniation. I would say that you are ready to try something a bit more intricate. (9/10)
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C_Lakewood
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Jun 2, 2004 |
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Delightful and subtle. The punctuation could be improved, but the style is impeccable. (9/10)
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Faibhar
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Jun 2, 2004 |
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Traffic outside of the Parisian apartment was muffled and that was good. This story reads well. Like a fine Sunday periodical offering the reaader his or her choice of interest. The story's wager may be small, but the reader's dividends large. (8/10)
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Roamer
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Jun 2, 2004 |
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Its a pleasure to have such sophisticated and subtle writing on this site!
How does anyone mix erotic writing with Hemmingway? Ok, it's not that explicit, it is subtle but has to be one of the best spanking stories around. I reread Sophias Diary and it was a worthy winner.
Nice writing, please grace us with more? (10/10)
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