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Toys in the Attic
Author: Carmenica Diaz
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(Added on May 6, 2004)
(This month 22470 readers) (Total 49802 readers) |
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Tim and Diana, newlyweds, move into their new house and Tim finds a box of bondage toys in the attic. Who put them there? Why does Diana enjoy using them on Tim? Why does Tim find control slipping away? (By the author of Kryztal and Useful Humilation) |
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Average (?):  (8.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
noir
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May 11, 2010 |
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Characters felt very believable. Excellent story. (9/10)
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Dryhill
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Apr 28, 2010 |
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i have nothing more to add than has already been said. Well done. (9/10)
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BigCat
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Oct 7, 2005 |
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Very well done. Good tension. Good character development. Good "what's next" motif. Would very much like to see the rest. (9/10)
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spandexbound
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Mar 19, 2005 |
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Good writing, excellent editing, and the tension between the characters jumps off the page. (9/10)
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pet10
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May 17, 2004 |
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The story's interesting it is worth the monney: 3 dollar! (9/10)
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abitbent
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May 7, 2004 |
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I agree with bracemaiden, a wonderful story. It's innocence draws you in to the story. The couple being so new to each other, leaves the possibility of endless escapades between the two. I can't wait for further chapters myself. (9/10)
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bracemaiden
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May 6, 2004 |
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I look forward to what else might be in those boxes! I'm also surprised that you know there will be 10 parts even when part 1 is just being posted. That's someone who sure plans ahead! (9/10)
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- Replied by:
j_michell
(Edit) (May 9, 2004)
- It was real reasy to know there would be 10 parts. they are all ready writen and for sell at http://carmenicadiaz.tripod.com/ If we see the other 9 parts here I will be suprised.
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abitbent
(Edit) (May 12, 2004)
- *sigh* well in that case it saddens me to see deliberate spamming. The story is still good though in my opinion. Paying money for it.... ah no.
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