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Good Girl
Author: Andrea
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(Added on May 2, 2004)
(This month 11482 readers) (Total 27820 readers) |
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A young slave shows her submission. |
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Average (?):  (7.5/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
kisa_NW
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Feb 23, 2005 |
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Wow, I really thought this was great! (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
MitchCarson
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May 6, 2004 |
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An arousing piece. The thoughts of the submissive are very well done and even touching at times. Still, when you get right down to it, the work is just a sordid, formulaic scene- good smut to be sure, but nothing more.
(7/10)
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| Reviewer:
peachers
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May 4, 2004 |
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good job. great how u told of her feeling ,but need to be longer with more wet details.
keep this dtory going and get more daring. (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
fate
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May 4, 2004 |
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I liked it. Great bondage and d/s. Hopefully even more harsh bondage play in subsequent chapters. (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
bambipaige
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May 3, 2004 |
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Great story!! Good writing, and I love the way her submission is portrayed, and especially how much you focus on what she's feeling (and what you put her through. My ONLY complaint is that it isn't long enough. Please write more :). (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
Dododecapod
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May 3, 2004 |
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Adequate writing, decent grammar and spelling, but nothing new or especially interesting. Could have been much better. (5/10)
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