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Before Lunch
Author: Rafu
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(Added on Apr 14, 2004)
(This month 12487 readers) (Total 31477 readers) |
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She's the perfect girlfriend, full of charm and warmth. When she takes me to meet her family one Sunday, I fall in love with them as well. It promises to be a wonderful day. That is, once a certain family ritual is over and done with. A ritual involving debasement, humiliation, and unspeakable pain ... |
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Average (?):  (9/10) |
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| Reviewer:
JimmyJump
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Endearing, melancholic recollection of a love gone by and a strange happening that took place somewhere along the line. Beautifully written in a lightly subdued tone.
Excellent storytelling!
JJ (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
Shibari
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Aug 7, 2008 |
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Excellent. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Dec 23, 2007 |
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shows promise, will changing my review as needed upon more chaptersbeing added, need to see where it goes
had to re read and review, much better the second time around (9/10)
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longrover
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Apr 16, 2004 |
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The protagonist, partially forewarned, was presented with a test for which he could not have prepared. The contest between the evidence before his eyes and his college friends stalemated him, as similar contests stalemate so many people. An outstanding piece of writing; this author's best to date. (10/10)
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WackySpurtz
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Apr 16, 2004 |
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Not exactly erotic for my tastes, but certainly extremely well written and original. Probably about the best crafted story I have read here. (9/10)
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lex ludite
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Apr 15, 2004 |
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This is not the first time that I have been impressed by the talent of this author, an accomplished writer with a wonderful eye for detail, an extremely subtle touch and a mature understanding of the nuances associated with any type of relationship. I'm sure this effort will attract the interest of the cp crowd, but there is a great deal more contained in this little exercise in understated horror. (10/10)
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