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Naturally Demanding
Author: Jim Hale
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(Added on Apr 1, 2004)
(This month 103053 readers) (Total 143584 readers) |
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Naturally Demanding is a story about a male high school senior who has fantasized for many years about being a slave for some girl. He meets a high school girl who specializes in making his fantasy come true. Her whole family, dad, mom and twin daughters live the very real life style which John believes he seeks. In a very short time this, "Goddess", and her family take John, from being a, "normal" young man to a very used slave. But is their use torture to him, or does he revile in it? |
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Average (?):  (8.5/10) |
Average
Rating:  (9/10) |
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| Reviewer:
BigCat
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Aug 5, 2005 |
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Wow. Heavy duty (doo-doo) stuff. Not my cup but well written. (8/10)
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makito
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Jun 7, 2005 |
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The best! (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
Grafitti
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Jul 6, 2004 |
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I enjoyed this story.It reminds me of crushes I had on female students in highschool.I fantasized about each of them dominating me to similar extremes as in this story. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
billyinc1
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Apr 4, 2004 |
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i truly enjoyed this story, it very neat to learn that a whole family knows that there is a need for slaves to serve them. i have no doubt he will enjoy serving the Women of the family but how is he going to react to the father? Can\'t wait to find out if you chose to continue the story Jim. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
wrighter4u
(Edit) (Jun 15, 2004)
- Thank you for taking the time to write a review. Thanks also for the high marks. I have changed the story a little since your review. Several errors have been corrected. The story has become more extreme.
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| Reviewer:
rgratt
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Apr 3, 2004 |
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Please keep this story going, it made me wish I was him, thank you for such a great story (9/10)
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- Replied by:
wrighter4u
(Edit) (Jun 15, 2004)
- Thank you for your review and the high marks. I continued the story. I hope you enjoyed it.
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