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The Arena Survivor
Author: dave johns
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(Added on Mar 30, 2004)
(This month 20540 readers) (Total 33769 readers) |
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A story that has a similar theme and historical setting to my earlier one, but a very different outcome. |
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Average (?):  (6.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
HuManiMal
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Jan 4, 2012 |
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Parts where great, but entire story was a badly assembled, non sequitur telling. On top of of this is modern words un a period piece (jet black). It can be so much better, falls like a rock. (5/10)
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| Reviewer:
jeanne
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Apr 7, 2004 |
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An unusual tale, what I call \'sunny\' snuff in that everybody is having a good time on the arena, including the sentenced sluts. Loved the part where a girl sentenced to be fucked to death by an elephant comes into the arena strutting her stuff, and gives a blow job to her guards as they tie her down. That\'s the spirit! (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
Curtis
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Apr 2, 2004 |
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My biggest problem was the lack of reality of the penis sizes. A horse will rarely go half the length you cite, and the same for an elephant or bull. The stories told by the \"actresses\" were much hotter than the feature event and saved you from a lower score. (6/10)
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| Reviewer:
Faibhar
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Mar 30, 2004 |
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Well written and if one is a fan of history and animal husbandry of a differing sort, this should appeal. Non sequitors and misspellings may distract. (6/10)
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chksng19
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Mar 30, 2004 |
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An interesting premise, hoped for the mild acceptance to end and the terror of a bull rape to begin. Wasn't there.
Good writing skills, but story was more romantic than violent (if that can happen with bestiality).
Could use a little "punching up". Looking forward to your next story. (6/10)
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