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Jess Gets a Spanking
Author: Krystal Dreams
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(Added on Mar 30, 2004)
(This month 9838 readers) (Total 18670 readers) |
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Jess is acting like a spoiled child so Eric gives her a spanking... |
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Average (?):  (7/10) |
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| Reviewer:
angel{HM}
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Mar 23, 2007 |
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I liked this story very much. For me it had a realistic feel to it and also made me think upon a similar experience. The last paragraph is too long, whether or not you noticed it in your final edit, it needs to be broken up. Watch your spelling on a few words in the opening paragraphs but apart from that it was a good read. Thankyou! (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
Vondeloy
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Apr 30, 2004 |
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A fine piece of fiction, but nothing special. (7/10)
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longrover
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Mar 30, 2004 |
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I don't disagree with the other reviewers, but I gave it an eight because I lived through something remarkably like it many years ago. The plot was almost dead on, the characters fit the situation I was in, and... I liked it. What can I say?
The last paragraph is way too long, though, and it could use a good editor. (8/10)
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e.e. norcod
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Mar 30, 2004 |
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Reads like an early effort at writing a sexual fantasy piece spicing up love making with a mild little hand spanking as foreplay. However, the author writes quite well going through considerable effort to set the scene. Really more of the sort of thing that one would expect in Cosmo than the BDSMLibrary. But it is well written enough to make it well worth reading.
Looking forward to your further efforts. (7/10)
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Lord Douche
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Mar 30, 2004 |
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A little short, and could do with some paragraphs, but a nice story none the less. (6/10)
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