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Ritual Control
Author: Empty soul
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(Added on Mar 21, 2004)
(This month 9981 readers) (Total 23885 readers) |
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A young man discovers a ritual that grants him some amazing powers. |
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Average (?):  (7/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
crickette
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Aug 7, 2005 |
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You are off to a good start. I did not consider it slow at all. It gave us an insight into the character allowing me to put myself more into the story, kinda like the fly on the wall. Interesting power to have. The possibilities really are endless. I can not wait to see the downside....there is ALWAYS a downside. (7/10)
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mkemse
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Sep 3, 2004 |
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well done (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
peachers
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Apr 5, 2004 |
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give me more pls (7/10)
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e.e. norcod
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Mar 25, 2004 |
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A good start by a new author. Still a bit rough and crude by my standards and descriptions could use a lot more detail. However, the author has a distinct and clear authorial voice and knows where he is going. There is no need to apologize for a slow start. It is amazing how many readers appreciate the careful setting of a scene. I do expect improvement with further chapters and if this occurs my ratings will adjust upwards. I myself enjoy reading about corporal punishment of Catholic schoolgirls so that is one direction you can develop.
Best wishes and good luck! (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
mlbryant
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Mar 22, 2004 |
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A good beginning - shows promise (8/10)
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Lord Douche
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Mar 22, 2004 |
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Starts off good :) Keep it coming. (8/10)
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