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Sentence: Fifty Strokes Of The Cane
Author: Alex
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(Added on Mar 21, 2004)
(This month 17749 readers) (Total 33719 readers) |
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Two American co-eds go travelling abroad and are not careful enough about anti-drug laws. They are both summarily sentenced to receive fifty strokes of the cane. |
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Average (?):  (8.5/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
kittenfemme
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Apr 4, 2004 |
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I found the setting and characters to be quite believable. The humiliation is nearly palpable. Well done. (9/10)
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pet10
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Mar 27, 2004 |
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This is a good canning story (10/10)
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boccaccio2000g
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Mar 25, 2004 |
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A nice well-constructed story, but, as I've written before, I would prefer six strokes described in lingering detail to fifty strokes that tend to run together a bit. It's hard to pinpoint precisely how and where the story came up short in my estimation, but I didn't really hear the sharp snap of the cane on female flesh, nor the laments of the unfortunate victim. The discipline of the scene came through, but neither flogger nor floggee seems swept away by the (potential) eroticism of the scene. Violence without the sexual component leaves me a little cold. (8/10)
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e.e. norcod
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Mar 24, 2004 |
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Gotta disagree with lex on this one. I thought the plot was believable as was the protagonist. This is maybe the best caning story I have ever read (maybe better than any I have ever written). I do think that the intro posted on this one is the wrong intro but these mistakes happen to us all (This appears to be the repost of a story posted two cycles ago and now deleted. The into as of this date describes an English scholastic caning whereas this story concerns a judicial caning in a Southeast Asian country.
In any case, bravo Alex (10/10)
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lex ludite
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Mar 24, 2004 |
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Forget the plot and the characters, they aren't worth talking about. The center piece of this story is the caning and the thoughts of both the victim and her punisher during the ordeal. This was done in excellent fashion and that separates this from most works that cover the same ground, or should I say "bottom". (8/10)
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