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Anne working Overtime
Author: Tantala
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(Added on Mar 15, 2004)
(This month 103421 readers) (Total 222279 readers) |
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Anne is a young student with an increasing awareness of her submissive lesbian tendencies. It becomes an ever greater problem to her - untill she meets Jean. The woman opens up a new world to her. A world she never knew existed..... |
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Average (?):  (8/10) |
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JimmyJump
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Nov 13, 2010 |
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Story deserves better than an eight. Exquisitely well-chiseled characters move in a well defined world, where they have adequately written conversations and larger than life musings.
Great stuff.
JJ (10/10)
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msnaughtygrrl
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May 13, 2005 |
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As a pleasure grrl myself i found the telling of the tale very stimulating indeed ... certainly there are spelling errors and gramatical mistakes but the loving detail and care in which Tantala has written this long and luscious piece has me wet and eager for more of her stories. (9/10)
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mkemse
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Apr 25, 2005 |
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very weel written and layed out (9/10)
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BDSM_Tourguide
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Jul 27, 2004 |
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Amazingly descriptive! What an amazing story! This story gets right into your head and fills your mind up with the imagery being presented. If this author has not thought of writing professionally, then the author certainly should. (9/10)
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Mobius
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Jul 26, 2004 |
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Dispite the 6 rating It was well writen. The reson I gave it a six was the lack of direction this story is at. Where is it going. Is Ann being trained mearly as a service girl or something more? Train her for the serivce then do something with her for petes sake. Sell her at auction turn her into a slave. But the constance cunilingus is getting very old. Well writen and I will continue to read it in the hope it goes some were. (6/10)
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Curtis
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Apr 2, 2004 |
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Well deserving of its 'slow' code, I do think the foreplay was delayed too far into part two. If you were going to put it off that long, I think you should've just made part one longer, so the 'juicey stuff' would come closer to the beginning of the second chapter. Several misspellings of the type that evade spellcheck. Is there anyone you can get to pre-read this before you post it? I find it interesting that it looks like the entire story will be told in flash-back. Not something I prefer, but it's being executed well here. Really hoping for more heat in part three. (break) Well, three did have more sex, quite a lot in fact, but the spelling errors continued. I'm following kittenfemme. Downgraded rating. And I won't be reading further chapters. (7/10)
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Wmnwholves
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Apr 1, 2004 |
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I am really enjoying the flow of this story... But like kittenfemme, I find myself hung up on the punctuation typos... But definitely keep up the good work... I can\'t wait for the next chapter with this cliffhanger... (8/10)
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kittenfemme
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Mar 26, 2004 |
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Like e.e. norcord (who seems to be reviewing every single story I've read on this site recently ^_^ ), I enjoy a slowly developing story with at least a romantic undercurrent in the beginning. The odd misspellings here and there threw me out of the story though. It's a pet peeve of mine... kin to waking suddenly from an interesting dream. Regardless, the tale is enjoyable. More, please? (7/10)
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jbowler65
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Mar 21, 2004 |
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Great beginning. We also enjoy the slow build up and all the little details that adds color to the whole story. We look forward to seeing how it continues to develop! (8/10)
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e.e. norcod
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Mar 17, 2004 |
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This reads like the very good opening for a very sensitive coming out as a BDSM-kink story But I would not dare predict which direction the author eventually takes it. I, personally, really like slowly developing stories although I should be quick to point out that this is very much a minority opinion on this site. What in particular I liked about the first chapter is its explication of the thoughts of a relatively young lesbian coming to terms with her nature. Where does a crush on a teacher leave off and where does sexual attraction begin. Hopefully, Chapter 2 will focus on the realization that the protagonist is a submissive. If it unfolds as slowly and gracefully as the first chapter, I will be pleased and maintain my eight rating. Down the road I fervently hope that at least one chapter will be devoted to the corporal punishments that are my particular kink. (8/10)
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