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The Calculus Tutorial
Author: E. E. Norcod
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(Added on Mar 15, 2004)
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A liberal arts co-ed learns that Integral Calculus can change your whole outlook on life. |
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Jun 1, 2004 |
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it was a good read (8/10)
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bracemaiden
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Mar 25, 2004 |
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A bit too violent for my tastes, without much bondage, but I especially liked the sense of fear and eroticism of the opening.
I have to agree with Jacen about dropping the capitalization of "He". It is quite annoying when it is capitalized. (8/10)
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- Replied by:
e.e. norcod
(Edit) (Mar 25, 2004)
- I agree with both of you, by the way. I find it extremely cumbersome. Unfortunately it was one of those usages that got cross-riffed between the writer I was mentoring and myself. "n" will do better next time. By the way, bracemaiden, the part you liked the most had the largest input from "n". The part you liked the least was written almost exclusively by me. So what you really liked was "n's" writing! I will very definitely have to pass that on to them. They are currently working up the nerve to start writing again and I hope your appreciation of their work will spur them to resume their efforts.
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Jacen
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Mar 24, 2004 |
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Some spelling/editing errors, but the author claimed responsibility for them, so I wont bitch :) The capitalized He/ect was annoying and seemed out of place in the mostly nc first part, and then dropping it was inconsistent (though relaxing). Two brief mentions and no real descriptions of enemas don’t really justify the listing of it in the contents. All in all though, a good punishment story with a nice twist. (8/10)
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kemosabe
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Mar 19, 2004 |
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Author! Author! I even forgive him for misspelling "Crepe Myrtle".
Can't say enough good things about this. Please don't leave us without more. (10/10)
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Lord Douche
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Mar 17, 2004 |
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I almost gave it a nine... simply because there wasn't enough enema's in it! (this being a major selling point for me)
A lovely story itself though. (10/10)
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gillian
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Mar 16, 2004 |
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Fantastic story, I like the beginnings of a scenario between Mother and Daughter. Maybe a little incest who knows? Don't keep us waiting to long for the next part, Please. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
e.e. norcod
(Edit) (Mar 16, 2004)
- dear gillian
Glad you enjoyed it. This story was written as a one off. It actually started as a writing assignment for a student who then failed to complete it. I so enjoyed the premise that I took up the uncompleted work and finished it. Although most of what I write are longer stories posted as serials, this one was intended from the start to be a shorter piece designed from the start to show some of properties of the classical Aristotealan ending (denoughment,anticlimax, unexpected twist and preordination). I have thought about sequels to this but they will have to await the completion of the "Belles" series and a sequel to "The Intern". I can assure you, however, that any sequel will involve "n", her mother, several other co-eds, the Dean of Women, and that terrible Calculus Instructor.
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