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Mirror, Mirror
Author: Jason
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(Added on Mar 12, 2004)
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Two blonde babes take a cocky young teen all the way, over the top. |
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Average (?):  (9/10) |
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| Reviewer:
cbtboyuk
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May 9, 2010 |
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Nasty, witty, vicious, swift whirlwind of a story (10/10)
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kinkcrazy
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Oct 5, 2007 |
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Good story, well written but very short. Not very descriptive (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
lex ludite
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Mar 14, 2004 |
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I know it's rare to use "over the top" to describe a writing style, but the vocabulary and juxtaposition of words, teetering at times on the verge of becoming florid, combined with a breathless, almost stream of consciousness, but not quite, method of describing the thought processes of the boy-toy to his surroundings merits more than my usual "well written" when it comes to this nasty little surprise of a story. I love the twins with their sing-song style of speaking and the way the author handles the cadence of their interaction with each other, Aaron and the unseen audience. Come to think of it, what over-sexed teenaged boy wouldn't go crazy for this pair? The ending is pure viciousness and will likely unsettle a portion of the readership, poor babies. The sex and the heat are strangely muted, but what there is packs a wallop. All this being said, and despite the genre this story represents, it must be well and truly acknowledged as a strong entry into the best story of the "day, week, month or year", if we had such a category. (10/10)
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Enos Quill
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Mar 12, 2004 |
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Slick witty fast leave-you-laughing rambunctious romp. Wish I had this writer's facility with words. Nice job. (10/10)
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