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Charity Events
Author: Captv8td
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(Added on Mar 12, 2004)
(This month 102117 readers) (Total 152213 readers) |
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Charity is finishing her sophomore year in college but is also secretly writing erotica and publishing it on the internet. Her stories always end up with the heroine becoming captive to a demanding mistress. Soon, however, her reality starts to look very much like a plot from one of her stories. |
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mkemse
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Jan 17, 2009 |
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one of the most consistantly great writers here all your stories are very well done (9/10)
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alsub
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Aug 19, 2008 |
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One Of the best I have read here at bdsmlibrary. I was looking for more at the end because I was so hooked in the story. (10/10)
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firestar77
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Jul 4, 2008 |
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Your story was excellent, well written, well paced, I just wish it was longer. (9/10)
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Euryleia
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Mar 16, 2008 |
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I enjoy the way your characters interact and move down the path toward submission. The dialogue and pacing was excellent. (9/10)
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sue.oates
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Dec 28, 2007 |
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Absolutely loved it, especially the beginning where Charity is slowly enslaved by Janice. A real feeling of caring about what happens to the characters, Hal I felt was a bit of a throwaway, almost felt like it was going to be written more, but was finished off a little quickly.
Don't let that detract though.. brilliant story well worth reading (9/10)
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msilsby
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Aug 29, 2007 |
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One of the best stories on the web for this genre. Story offers so many possibilities . . . Possible alternative endings? And what happens to charity and her soon to be classmate/ex mistress? Ooh, the possibilities! (10/10)
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smartass kitten
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May 22, 2007 |
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This one is my favorite of your stories.
Slow, tame for some, but very nice and detailed.
Too bad about the kinda abrupt ending. (8/10)
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CrazyMe
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Nov 19, 2005 |
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Great story, really. I liked the consensuel theme which runs run the entire story. The end was a bit hasty but else it was truly worth my time. (9/10)
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(7/10)
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Apr 7, 2004 |
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The genre of f/f is well explored, it requests imagination and elegance to succeed. A well done foray, but a bit too tame maybe? (8/10)
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Wmnwholves
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Apr 6, 2004 |
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This is a very well written story... I would love to see what Charity is up to in her junior year. (9/10)
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Curtis
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Mar 31, 2004 |
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The best of the lot, to date. Hoping for more, and hoping that this won't end up being set in the Princess Alana world where slavery is legal.. So far it could go either way, but she seems to be leaning against. (edit) I DID review this earlier! Nope, not the Princess Alana world. It seems to've ended, so I'll note that the last six chapters (though 14) were as good as the first. It DID seem to wrap up too hastily. It FELT like it rushed to a conclusion in the final two screens, but they have to end somewhere. Now that I think about it, Princess Alana ended quickly, too, but not AS quickly (I don't think). Eek! I shouldn't've come back -- now I have to downgrade my rating. Damn! (9/10)
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rose362436
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Mar 24, 2004 |
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This is really a great story. The twist are really good. I would really love to see what happens when the college starts and the teacher faces her (Master/Mistress) students. (9/10)
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e.e. norcod
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Mar 22, 2004 |
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Captv8td gets better and better as each story unfolds and this may be the best effort to date! but only you the reader can determine how good this story is. The last story by this author, the "Princess Alana" serial garnerned a record number of reviewers in a short time. Will "Charity" equal this record? Don't just be a lurking reader, become a reviewer. As for me, degenerate sadistical evangelist that I am, I can only hope that the author and Charity are both subject to the stringent chastisement that all willful females deserve. In the meantime, read the story and post your review.
Chapter 12 is the best thing that Captiv8d has ever written. I am forced to increase my rating to a nine. (9/10)
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Patti
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Mar 21, 2004 |
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This is shaping up as the best of Captv8d's stories so far, and that is saying a lot. Hope it continues for many more chapters. (9/10)
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jbowler65
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Mar 21, 2004 |
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Great work and nicely developed. (9/10)
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aztec
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Mar 15, 2004 |
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Great start! All of Captv8td's stories are very well written. I can't wait for more chapters. (9/10)
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gillian
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Mar 14, 2004 |
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Very well written, good content. I do hope that it continues in the same veign and that there is a lot of it. I can't wait. (9/10)
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