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Dead Ringer
Author: Torrent
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(Added on Mar 12, 2004)
(This month 11586 readers) (Total 26457 readers) |
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In this sequel to "Jewels in Her Crown," the deadly dildo finally gets a workout and a familiar blonde's goose is cooked. |
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Jan 23, 2009 |
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good reading (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
Faibhar
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Mar 21, 2004 |
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You may well ask with "Fucking Supergirl" and French cuisine included just how could anyone go wrong with this story ? Plenty of ways, of course, yet this talented writer entertains with his many characters and scenarios all keeping their dialogue consistent with their personae.
For a fun read this story is good. (8/10)
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- Replied by:
rftorrent
(Edit) (Mar 23, 2004)
- Thanks for taking the time to read and review my story.
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| Reviewer:
fetish101
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Mar 14, 2004 |
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Gotta dissagree. This story seemed like it wanted to develop alot of characters and plot, but all it did was dilude the whole thing. It was not nearly long enough to develop and shape all the characters that were needed in the story, and as such left me feeling like the whole thing was rushed.
The overall premise was good though, but I think that if one is going to make the effort to develop more than the token two characters in a story, a little more effort is required. (5/10)
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- Replied by:
rftorrent
(Edit) (Mar 23, 2004)
- It was rushed. I wish I had spent more time on it. Such is life.
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| Reviewer:
lex ludite
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Mar 13, 2004 |
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This latest installment of the super heroine saga is extremely well written, which is a trademark of the author. The comic book violence was a bit unsettling this time. As in the case of most of his stories the heroine dies horribly, a fate usually undeserved, which makes it even more distasteful. Truth be said, I think Torrent is the best writer to have graced the site in a long time, but I wish he'd get whatever is bothering him out of his system. (8/10)
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- Replied by:
rftorrent
(Edit) (Mar 13, 2004)
- Thanks. Your point is well taken.
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