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The Lost Prince--A Ponygirl Epic
Author: AlwaysCocked
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(Added on Mar 9, 2004)
(This month 143861 readers) (Total 269512 readers) |
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I wanted to come up with a realistic scenario involving ponygirls. The story is set in a post-apocalyptic world where technology is nearly dead and germ warfare has killed off all beasts of burden. Inspired by Transceptor, by Michael Manning/Patrick Conlon. |
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Average (?):  (9.5/10) |
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mkemse
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Jan 23, 2009 |
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love pony girl stories (8/10)
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JimmyJump
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Jan 23, 2009 |
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This one was added to my shelf quite a while ago, tho for some unfathomable reason, I never reviewed/rated it...
Well, I can only say that the word 'epic' in the title is indeed a very apt addition, as epical proportions is what we're talking about here.
The whole of the tale, to me, sometimes had the feel of "The Gunslinger", the first book in Stephen King's 'Dark Tower' series.
Anyway, I just wanted to say I absolutely loved the story, and I'm going to leave it at that, as it would take a new small novel to sum-up all of the positive things.
JJ (10/10)
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sillypony
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Oct 24, 2008 |
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I love love love this story. The premise is amazing, the story has a plot, but still plenty of sex. It is very well written, and gives great insight to the characters thinking. I can't wait to see more! (10/10)
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cala
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Mar 2, 2007 |
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The story continues.. Yea! (9/10)
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Claire
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Mar 2, 2007 |
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Great story. I just finished the rest of it last night and was pleased to discover the new post tonight. There were a few sections where the switching sotry/character lines was done poorly. This is mostly a formatting problem - there should be some kind of divider, a row of stars or something to show that you are making the shift. It is rather startling to be reading along about one character and have the next paragraph be about a totally different character and line of the story. This was very confusing the first time I came upon it, but I quickly realized it wasn't that the post or chapter had been scrambled. You might include in your story code that it is slow in getting to the sex. Not that that is bad, because you were laying a solid foundation for real characters and a real story not just a story about sex. That is the kind of story I usually like best, but sometimes I just want the violent sex and humiliation and its nice to know ahead of time whether this is going to be a quickie or if it is someting I can settle into for a while. (9/10)
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Kiri
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Jan 10, 2006 |
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I hope that there will be futher updates to this, I would really like to read more. The plot is nicely involved, and the descriptions are wonderful.
The Sci-fi setting works very well too. (9/10)
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CrazyMe
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Aug 29, 2005 |
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A very good read with a great plot as well as interesting and believable characters. I really hope there will be more soon. The entire world is well-described and quite cool. (10/10)
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NistShadow
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May 24, 2005 |
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I was really enjoying reading this..... (8/10)
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Wreak
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Feb 28, 2005 |
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Excellent story! Looking forward to more :) (10/10)
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truckinnhorsin
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Feb 27, 2005 |
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Absolutely loved it! very well thought out, it has history as well as a mysterious type plot that unfolds wonderfully. You are going to continue aren't you? (10/10)
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poutrok
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Feb 11, 2005 |
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I thought it read very well, kept my attention the whole time and I wanted to know more. The story and plot are great and the characters very interesting. Bottom line I want to read more..if this was a book, Id buy it. Congratulations to the author. Job well done...you have another devoted reader. (10/10)
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incognito
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Aug 30, 2004 |
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very erotic and very good story. I kept reading just for the plot! (10/10)
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newwmember
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May 4, 2004 |
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Sorry to rate your story only now. Why I rate 9/10 : Extremely well written, the author wasts no time to go in details as realistic as possible, although there is no gratis hurting (fortunately) the story and the "ambiente" is very heavy. I cannot remember having read a ponygirl story that seems like just has happened in real life. BDSM (especially in pony girl stories) is not necesseryly linked together with sex. (9/10)
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rob.wilson
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Apr 24, 2004 |
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As much as I hate to admit it, sometimes I think the sex is taking away from the story. Your charaters and the world they live in is so rich and detailed that stepping away from that disrupts my enjoyment of the story.
It's a small issue but it prevents me from giving you a 10.
I still can't wait for the next chapter. (9/10)
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warren_Z
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Apr 8, 2004 |
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Once again the author has posted a high quality literary work on an amateur site. The characters and the plot are developing and unfolding beautifully. No lack of creativity here. (10/10)
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oidMe
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Mar 30, 2004 |
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Can't wait to read more...complete it would be quite publishable. (10/10)
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Sui Lerua
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Mar 16, 2004 |
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(March 16th - after update) Deliciously detailed ponygirl scene, when it finally arrived! Looks like an intriguing plot on the boil too. Keep up the good work.
(March 10th) This is a very nice read. Lovely descriptions, teasing erotica and the promise of a real plot. Don't keep us waiting too long for the next chapter! (9/10)
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MrMan
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Mar 16, 2004 |
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This is high quality erotic Science-Fiction. I want to read more of this! I hope you can post longer sections soon. (9/10)
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castle2001
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Mar 12, 2004 |
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Professional quality as a lead in. Please continue. (9/10)
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Lady Blade
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Mar 10, 2004 |
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This is very good. I can not wait to read more. I would make one suggestion though...I did find a *few* errors, which as the story is really well written, caused one to pause when reading it. Other than that, I truly can't wait to read the rest and see where you go with it. Well done, just give yourself a second edit from time to time...:) (9/10)
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