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Author: Spitman
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(Added on Feb 23, 2004)
(This month 32385 readers) (Total 65608 readers) |
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Three girls go for a wild, crazy holiday week in Amsterdam in a Dolcett-oriented future world, curious to see if it's true and they really eat girls over there. They find themselves caught up in the atmosphere, with unexpected consequences. |
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Average (?):  (8/10) |
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kicksnf
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Jun 17, 2011 |
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SICK !!! SICK !!! SICK !!! SICK !!! SICK !!! SICK !!! (1/10)
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mkemse
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Apr 30, 2006 |
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HOT (9/10)
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Reddbunnz
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Apr 8, 2005 |
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Great story! When will we get to see Chapter 2? (9/10)
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badkitten
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Mar 25, 2005 |
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This is a very good story, I am anxiously awaiting the next chapter! (9/10)
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Robin Lane
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Oct 23, 2004 |
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I found this story to be quite enjoyable. Spitman has exhibited superior writing skills in building this environment, and making us what to be part of it, just as these three girls end up doing. In real life, lots of people have joined the circus after attending a performance. If it's legitimate in reality, it is legitimate in fantasy. (9/10)
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Doc Odd
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Jun 17, 2004 |
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I really want to see chapter 2. (9/10)
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fooman
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Jun 15, 2004 |
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I love all the suspense. Please write more! I think the sort of story works well when the participants are tricked into the situation and then end up enjoying it later. I can't wait for the next installment! (10/10)
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neferkare
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Apr 2, 2004 |
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What? Only an Eight? Yes. None of the main protagonists are impaled, so this one gets a -1 modification for \"Teasing\":-)
I hope Beth, Sue, and Jenny get to the point in a future instalment:-) (8/10)
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teamster
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Mar 7, 2004 |
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a well written story about a subject i find repugnant. (8/10)
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faln12
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Mar 3, 2004 |
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Finish the story! (9/10)
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mistresscandy
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Feb 28, 2004 |
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This is a great story! it reads very well, I love the plot so far, and also seeing a story like this, being so consensual is a great change of pace :), I'd give ya a 10, but its a 9 simply because it aint finished yet! I'll be watching to see the rest of it! keep writing! (9/10)
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- Replied by:
Spitman
(Edit) (Feb 28, 2004)
- With encouragement like that, you can be sure that the next chapter will not be far behind! Thank you.
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slavelucy
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Feb 26, 2004 |
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Even though the subject matter is slightly more hardcore than i would generally go for, i still like this story; it's a fresh take on an old subject and is technically very well written, which just makes reading a story a so much better experience. (8/10)
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- Replied by:
Spitman
(Edit) (Feb 27, 2004)
- Thank you slavelucy. I have done a lot of work to improve my style, and this was the result, so I'm glad that you found it easy to read.
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cheetah
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Feb 23, 2004 |
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Good reading ..even though I prefer the nonconsensual side (8/10)
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- Replied by:
Spitman
(Edit) (Feb 25, 2004)
- Thank you for taking the trouble to post a review.
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