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Why Not
Author: M.M.
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(Added on Feb 23, 2004)
(This month 24832 readers) (Total 52950 readers) |
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A nice wife goes bad! She gets sadistic, he has no balls to leave... |
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Average (?):  (6.5/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
kinkcrazy
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Nov 30, 2008 |
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GREAT STYLE (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
marilyn
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Jul 22, 2006 |
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It's fine. Want more romantic extreme bdsm. (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
BigCat
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Jul 22, 2005 |
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Poorly edited. Seems some segments dropped. Other parts unintelligible. No development. Too much. Too severe for my tastes. Chaotic. AS disappointment after "Two of a Kind," which I really liked. (4/10)
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- Replied by:
mm2000xx
(Edit) (Jul 22, 2005)
- It was difficult for me to write these stories in english as it is not my motherly language so it took me some time to learn.
Try my story "Herrin" but it is a little bit over the top, maybe.
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| Reviewer:
trainmanretep
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Feb 26, 2004 |
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Interesting story but not properly developed andt very uneven writing. It seems that there are some gaps in the story. With quite a bit of editing this story could rate 8 or 9. (5/10)
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| Reviewer:
bdsmbill
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Feb 23, 2004 |
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I usually like F/m stories, but I really didn't care much for this one. The many errors were distracting, and the story line wasn't that great to begin with. (5/10)
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