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Rosered
Author: Rene
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(Added on Feb 16, 2004)
(This month 10129 readers) (Total 22991 readers) |
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A slave wins a red bottom contest at a local pub. True story. |
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Average (?):  (8.5/10) |
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Jul 20, 2008 |
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great story, great read (9/10)
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littleslut
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Jun 18, 2004 |
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A wonderful story and yet another credit to the writer's skill. I can't honestly say the scene portrayed could be much more vivid and to those reviewers that say it could be i ask them to indulge their imagination occasionaly, for a truly good story should open door's to people imagination and rosered does just that. Very well done. (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
WackySpurtz
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Apr 23, 2004 |
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This whole 'scene' game just is not all that erotic to me. It's the overly intellectuallized and silly, exaggerated seriousness of it all, that quickly becomes counterproductive to having any erotic appeal. This story captured this cold and dry essence, but not through overcoming it by any particularly good writing. (5/10)
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- Replied by:
rene197903
(Edit) (May 6, 2004)
- Actually, this was a true story. I was the bottom involved, and cold or dry was not anywhere near what I was feeling. I make a real effort to not judge the value of someone else's fetishes or their preferences. In fact I have found that the more intelligent people like to have a sense of occasion when they play. I write the way I write, for myself. I share because I know that good erotica is hard to find, especially fact based. I had a good time, and that is all that really matters, and my preferences are just as valid as yours. I might think that what you want is silly, but I would never presume to judge what you like- That would be ignorant of me. rene
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| Reviewer:
Wyn
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Feb 18, 2004 |
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There's not much else I can add to what's already been said. The author paints a wonderfully vivid account of the event. (8/10)
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jbowler65
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Feb 18, 2004 |
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Great recreation of the event. We really enjoyed the personalized style and the details on the emotions throughout. (9/10)
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Spitman
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Feb 18, 2004 |
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I agree with the other reviewers. This story doesn't let you go. It literally feels real. (Ouch!) And if it was a true story, lead me to that pub! In terms of style, it works well enough. (8/10)
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e.e. norcod
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Feb 17, 2004 |
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In general I have to agree with bdsmbill and nikka jones although I will fight them to the death (or in nikka's case, severly discipline her) over the details. Style and grammar leave a lot to be desired (minus two points). But the versimilutude of the experience that the writer conveys is convincing (plus one point). One of the finest pieces of writing of its kind. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
rene197903
(Edit) (Feb 18, 2004)
- Actually the grammar is an intentional device. I am an English major, and sometimes feel that sticking to the absolute "letter" of the grammatical code reads as very dry, and incredibly impersonal. Sentence fragments can sometimes convey a clipped emotional reaction better than a full sentence that states the same thing. I do appreciate that you enjoyed the story, and that you took the time to review it. However, not liking the "style" is a pesonal opinion. The style is exactly what I wanted it to be. Rene
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bdsmbill
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Feb 17, 2004 |
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I think it reads like a diary because it is a diary of an actual event. Many stories on this site claim to be true. I believe it this time. (9/10)
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Jones, Nikka
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Feb 17, 2004 |
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Well written. But reads like a diary entry, too personalized to be every reader's fantasy. The author has obviously been there and done that. Those of us who also have will appreciate the story more than those who haven't. (9/10)
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