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The Art of Good Fishing
Author: Spitman
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(Added on Feb 11, 2004)
(This month 13680 readers) (Total 27327 readers) |
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An Independence Day theme. Girls are captured by aliens for a mysterious purpose. |
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Average (?):  (6/10) |
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| Reviewer:
HuManiMal
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Nov 23, 2011 |
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Very funny and original idea! It is hard to make this idea erotic, did a good job and could be better, but not bad. I hope author can give it a second go, give girl some self time on journey. (6/10)
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kicksnf
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Jun 17, 2011 |
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SICK !!! SICK !!! SICK !!! SICK !!! SICK !!! SICK !!! SICK !!! SICK !!! SICK !!! SICK !!! SICK !!! SICK !!! SICK !!! SICK !!! SICK !!! SICK !!! SICK !!! SICK !!! (1/10)
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Apr 22, 2004 |
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Sci-Fi is not ertoic to me, this is no exception, sorry (4/10)
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kavasier_63
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Feb 19, 2004 |
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Although well written I felt the story lacked any sembelance of realism that i find in most erotic fiction. I suppose I am just not a big fan of Sci-fi or snuff but the story contained very little in the way of eroticism. (5/10)
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| Reviewer:
bdsmbill
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Feb 12, 2004 |
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I'm sure a lot of people think it works, and it was actually a very good story in terms of writing quality. The problem is, I come here to read erotic stories, and I just didn't find this one to be erotic at all. (6/10)
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arobert29
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Feb 12, 2004 |
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Nice story, very enjoyable to read. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
Faibhar
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Feb 12, 2004 |
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From the title to the very end of "T.A.G.F." the writer's vivid imagination should entertain a wide range of readers. (8/10)
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fetish101
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Feb 12, 2004 |
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seemed a bit rushed to me..I think I would have liked a little more character development (like about the girl's sadomasochist urges). All in all, I think this read more like a dolcett comic, without the drawings to go along with it. (7/10)
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- Replied by:
Spitman
(Edit) (Feb 12, 2004)
- Yes, the idea was to give it pace, and I think embellishment would reduce the impact. It is a cameo, and it was intended to work like a Dolcett comic, so I plead guilty as charged. There are some hints that could be developed further, but they are not essential to the main theme of the story. This one was reposted again and again in Usenet so there must be people who think it works!
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