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Sister's Keeper
Author: Jlou
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(Added on Feb 6, 2004)
(This month 58174 readers) (Total 93289 readers) |
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A shy college girl decides that she must abduct her sister in order to remain part of a lesbian cult. The abducted girl is tortured until she agrees to join the bizarre group. |
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Weighed
Average (?):  (6.5/10) |
Average
Rating:  (7/10) |
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| Reviewer:
Martiniman
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Dec 19, 2011 |
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A pretty good story, yet frustratingly unfinished. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
Dryhill
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Apr 2, 2010 |
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i agree with lex ludite a rather tire formula, needs charater development. Try a rewrite of the story making it a bit longer but with more detail. Do not be in such a hurry to get to the end. (5/10)
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Dec 23, 2007 |
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not bad,, enjoyable to read (6/10)
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| Reviewer:
lex ludite
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Feb 9, 2004 |
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I got the feeling half way through this story that I was reading one of those old bondage comics. The characters here fit right in, being totally two dimensional, a big, big negative. The tense the author chooses is rather bizarre, it was as if some one else was reading the bondage comic out loud now. The torments that the younger sister endures are straight from the used ideas bin. This story has little if any originality, no characters to speak of and a plot that has finger prints all over it. Finally, the word is "strait" jacket. Hate to be so negative; in the old days I'd have enjoyed writing this less than positive review. (5/10)
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| Reviewer:
boccaccio2000g
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Feb 8, 2004 |
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Not bad, and there are one or two nice little vignettes, but the story really strains the bounds of this reader's credibility. I don't mind it when villains do horrible things, but when the 'heroine' willingly puts her sister in the hands of this cult ... (6/10)
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jbowler65
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Feb 6, 2004 |
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Good story so far, but could use a little more character development and descriptions. (7/10)
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arobert29
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Feb 6, 2004 |
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Outstanding story, well written, and very enjoyable ot read. Please continue with it.
RObert, (9/10)
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