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Small compensations
Author: Woolfighter
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(Added on Feb 4, 2004)
(This month 14686 readers) (Total 30653 readers) |
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Natalia Firenze, an Italian Judge, hides in a small American villeage an has to pay a price... |
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Average (?):  (7/10) |
Average
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| Reviewer:
boccaccio2000g
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Feb 8, 2004 |
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This story has a very clever premise, an exciting new twist on the tired blackmail stories we have seen many times. And the writing has lots of energy and zest, but the English is seriously sub-standard. ///
"Only three days before her death, a commando of 40 armed men had rescued their boss assaulting the jail, leaving behind them 17 death guards and more the one hundred injured." ///
There are four separate mistakes in this sentence in the first paragraph, for instance. ///
I suspect that English is not Woolfighter's first language, and his English is probably as good or better than any foreign language of mine, but I'm sure he (or she) does not want to be patronized, and wants his story to be evaluated on the same scale as other writers.
(5/10)
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- Replied by:
boccaccio2000g
(Edit) (Feb 8, 2004)
- I just checked the author's profile and found that he is indeed Spanish. My hat is off to you for even trying to write stories in English.
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| Reviewer:
bdsmbill
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Feb 4, 2004 |
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I liked this story, even though the author has a little problem with the language. I look forward to future installments. (8/10)
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mkemse
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Feb 4, 2004 |
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So far it is realy good, i look forward to see where you take th story, hopefully far more blackmail for her and more humiliation, to me this has the making of a great story, will change me review and number as the story goes on (9/10)
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