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Blackmailed Nurse
Author: BDSM Bill
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(Added on Feb 1, 2004)
(This month 18207 readers) (Total 44439 readers) |
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Angie is caught stealing drugs and has to make a choice between slavery and prison. |
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Average (?):  (8/10) |
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Apr 5, 2004 |
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WOW, HOT, Exceptional (10/10)
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| Reviewer:
MrBill2355
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Feb 16, 2004 |
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A good read. The theme flowed well, characters were developed well and were consistent throughout the story. My wife who is curious about BDSM enjoyed it - it's light BDSM, and didn't scare her off. It lead to an evening of pleasure for both of us. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
bracemaiden
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Feb 10, 2004 |
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Not bad! It seems way to easy to get an orgasm or five, but it’s a fantasy. Good care and interest in the new slave.
As for the other review's mention of "lack of originality", are the thousands of other BDSM stories on here groundbreaking work? The ending was expected. Same with multi-million dollar movies. It was an enjoyable read, and that's what matters.
(8/10)
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lex ludite
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Feb 10, 2004 |
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Although well written this one generated zero heat as far as this reader is concerned. It also lacked even a shred of originality. The only difference between this story and literally hundreds like it is that this clone has much more granularity to it especially in justifying why the nurse would allow herself to become a slave. To sum it up it's as if the author decided to construct a template that could be used by other aspiring authors to write stories of this type. As a template it's terrific, as a clone, who cares? (5/10)
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- Replied by:
bdsmbill
(Edit) (Feb 10, 2004)
- I'm sorry you didn't like it. I knew it was a little softcore for the BDSM library when I posted it here. It's interesting to see the difference in voting here, as compared to other sites. On Literotica, this story has scored very highly (top 10%), but 2 out of 3 reviewers here panned it.
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| Reviewer:
sexyangel
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Feb 3, 2004 |
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Gosh, I guess the first reviewer downgraded this because it wasn't as brutal as he liked. This is a hot and sexy tale of slavery via blackmail. Like most stories from BDSMBill, it is very well written, which is no surprise, since he is a well-known professional writer in real life. If you can live without torture for one story, check this one out. (10/10)
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e.e. norcod
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Feb 2, 2004 |
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If I had to choose a title for this story I would call it "Slavery for Vanillas". Competently written (outside of the occassional 'Curse of Spellcheck' boo-boo) by an experienced author, this piece lack a charge. I never thought I would read dull BDSM but this is it. It lacked edge, color, a twist at the end. Dick Van Dyke and Mary Tyler Moore help solve Rhonda's problems? Nah, not even that kinky. A different ending might help, something unusual or insightful.
It will be interesting to see what other reviewers have to say. To the reader new to this site, this is probably the least kinky thing BDSM bill has ever written. Do not form an opinion of his skill without reading some of his other work. (6/10)
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