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Torture The Widow
Author: Harry Berg
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(Added on Jan 14, 2004)
(This month 542567 readers) (Total 969639 readers) |
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Newly widowed Army Captain Rossalind Donaldson returns home for her husband's funeral. The Donaldson's are incensed at the Captain bacause right before their son was killed, he found out she was behaving like a slut at her posting. The Donaldson's are a rich and twisted family of super patriotic practioners of S&M. They've decided to make Rossalind's wife utter hell beginning at her husband's wake. |
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SamCurious
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Jun 4, 2011 |
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Wow, you certainly pack a punch for an opening chapter. Can't wait to read the rest :D (9/10)
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JimmyJump
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Jan 23, 2009 |
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I must admit that at first I was put off by the crudeness of the characters.
But I persevered, and boy, am I glad I did...
Maybe it's time I went to see a doctor, because this tale is disgusting at times, and I loved every sentence of it.
I can understand pondbird's reasoning, but maybe that's just it: he's the only one sane left.
JJ (10/10)
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dumboldon
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Nov 12, 2007 |
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YES-break her...Love it!!! (10/10)
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pondbird
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Feb 16, 2007 |
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Good story, but it long and boring after awhile. After all the tortures Rozz went through, it is a wonder she could even walk or hold a pencil in her hands. I realize it is fiction, but now women or slut could endure what they went through and come out of it sane (5/10)
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ravenfish55
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Aug 20, 2005 |
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a great stury with plenty of excitment and leaving plenty of scope for continuing storylines from earlier chapters, for instance how about roz being reunited with the family who she went on yhe slaveship with, but include his wife this time.a very well written and enjoyable story. (10/10)
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cindi
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Mar 21, 2005 |
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excellent, well written, imaginative, and it has all of the topics it lists in the preview. (10/10)
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pq_accessories
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Feb 3, 2005 |
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There's enough "kink" here for the whole family! (10/10)
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lex ludite
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Jul 23, 2004 |
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What can be said except that this author can generate more heat in a paragraph than most posters can provide in a couple of pages. He has a gift for sustaining it as well. Couple this with a compact writing style and a most inventive imagination and you have a major talent. This sample really has me slavering for more. He has really set this one up well and what has been provided should serve as an excellent example of what a lead in to a longer story should look like. For these reasons I will break with my tradition of a book marker rating and give it what I think it will deserve when the dust settles, hopefully about two dozen chapters later.
After twenty-four chapters this may very well be the best thing he has yet produced. The sex and violence is great, but it's the way he segues from one kinky topic to another without missing a beat that really gets my attention. As of now, Harry is in a class by himself. (10/10)
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lord_odie
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Jun 24, 2004 |
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This is my favorite ongoing story on this site at the moment. My only complaint is that I wish that HarryBreg could write them faster. =] Not many stories have a character, let alone the main character, who is a dominant masocist. I love that. "Hurt me, or you're fired!!! Hurt me good, and I'll give you a raise..." Most of the stories on this site are centered around nonconcentual violence. It's just damn hot that the infamous Widow goes out of her way to find it. Keep up the good work, and may you never get writers block. =] (10/10)
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e.e. norcod
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Mar 8, 2004 |
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Harry Berg is the biggest pervert on the web! I managed, with great restraint, to hold off reviewing until now just to see how inventive he could get. A true master! What further amazes me is how far he can go without actually becoming crude, rude and profane. Still, no matter how good this one has been so far, it still pales before the first dozen chapters or so of "First Female President" which may be the finest kinky writing of all time (sorry Lex). In this story Harry Does for the military what he did for all Irish New England politicians in "First Female". Equally innovative was the brilliant short, short story "HP+". As the self appointed king of female c.p. I have to bow to a master greater than I. (9/10)
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- Replied by:
HarryBerg01
(Edit) (Mar 9, 2004)
- Thank you very much for your kind remarks and taking the time to review my story.
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Master Jim
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Feb 14, 2004 |
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A well written story with a most sensuous family scene. Excellent. I wait in hope for future episodes (9/10)
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jbowler65
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Jan 17, 2004 |
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Outstanding intro and setup to the story. The author has quite a bit of talent and we can't wait to read more! (9/10)
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woolfighter
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Jan 16, 2004 |
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Excellent. That's not a story, that is ART. (10/10)
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mkemse
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Jan 14, 2004 |
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what comes next :)?? (9/10)
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RichHumus
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Jan 14, 2004 |
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This one could go far. Looking forwards to the next installment or twenty.. :) (9/10)
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