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S.S.M.A.R.T. P.I.C.
Author: Frank Haegele
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(Added on Jan 9, 2004)
(This month 21753 readers) (Total 47219 readers) |
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S.S.M.A.R.T. P.I.C. is an underground organization that specializes in abusing and raping young women. It holds an annual meeting/performance that costs $5K to attend. In this episode, two sexy college coeds are abducted and taken to a vacant warehouse where they are used as the entertainment for the high priced meeting. |
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| Reviewer:
D. Atrocity
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Jul 18, 2004 |
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Very Good work. I love the way you describe details so that I can almost see what's happening in my mind. For future works, the only possible advice I could give you is to let the main character be more developed than beyond his sex life. Elaborate on the emotions, too, and things that aren't sex or bdsm focused. Still, this story rates a ten with me. (10/10)
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gypsiecowboy
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Apr 19, 2004 |
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let's just say that I am waiting for my invitation to attend the next meeting of the club! wonder though what it would have felt like to put one's cock inside a pussy that has been punished in this manner... fantastic I am sure, in that this is pure fantasy... g.c. (9/10)
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mkemse
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Apr 16, 2004 |
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could not find anything wrong with this gem, like raped at sea as well, hope you plan on more similar stories as time goes on (10/10)
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teamster
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Mar 10, 2004 |
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i have no quibbles with the writing style, its just that the whole thing is kind of a dry recitation of events... the characters have no inner life, no thoughts or emotions. (6/10)
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boccaccio2000g
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Jan 31, 2004 |
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Nothing fancy, just old good sex and violence and lots of it. One of the hotter stories I've read in the last year. (9/10)
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bdsmbill
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Jan 22, 2004 |
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Non-stop and pretty brutal, but not badly written. (9/10)
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jbowler65
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Jan 18, 2004 |
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Very good story with plenty of opportunity for future episodes. (9/10)
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