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Katrina's Taming
Author: Eve Adorer
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(Added on Jan 9, 2004)
(This month 232738 readers) (Total 383327 readers) |
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Katrina will lose all she owns unless she can get a massive loan. A long time girlfriend comes to the rescue at a price. The price for Katrina is heavy. A highly intelligent super fit strong-willed outdoor free spirit and sportsgirl, Katrina must submit to being tamed. |
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| Reviewer:
Boggart
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Nov 5, 2016 |
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The story itself was terrific. It is full of clever ideas and predicaments and the writing was free of grammatical and spelling errors, but it was full of the most superfluous and overblown hyperbole I have ever seen. I have to admit that I haven't finished the story yet (I will finish though) so there might some punchline at the end that explains the very odd descriptors that the author uses. Girl-sweat, girl-feet, girl-shape and on and on.
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"The wonderful poundage of my gloriously beautiful thighs"
This abominable sentence was used 3 times in 2 consecutive sentences! "My thighs" or perhaps "My shapely thighs" would have been vastly better and more appropriate.
Again, I haven't finished yet, so I might be missing something but at this point, about half way through, using the language in this way is making my brain hurt. (3/10)
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Martiniman
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Jan 22, 2012 |
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A very interesting & long story....just like I like them! (9/10)
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Kira
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Apr 5, 2010 |
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Very excellent story, nice fantasy. Just love the style of writing too. My favorite thing are the breast propellers, a great idea from you, never read about this in another story somethere else. Would it be possible to invent a similar device for the crotch area? Would be happy to read about in this or your next story(s).
Sorry I didn't mention the nice clit collar, would be nice to read somthing similar in future.
Please keep writing :-) (10/10)
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slv_bea
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Jun 8, 2006 |
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my Master was very excited by your story, it is one of the best he ever read, he said. congratulations! (10/10)
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JimmyJump
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Mar 29, 2006 |
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Altough starting off rather hesitantly and a tad awkward, this story quickly gets much better real fast...
Extraordinary writing, with some truly wicked concoctions along the way... Just love it...
Thank you so much for your contributions. (10/10)
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Engineer
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Feb 29, 2004 |
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Plot and topics are great - but oh the language! Those permanent silly pseudo-girly phrases and additions are boring and make the text nearly unreadable. (5/10)
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- Replied by:
JimmyJump
(Edit) (Mar 29, 2006)
- I feel that it is mainly BECAUSE of the language used (in combination with the wild imagination), that this story works so well. In fact, it is the mix of the us of language and Eve Adorer's vivid fantasy, that make her stories what they are: top notch, highly erotic Girlifests...
JJ
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JimmyJump
(Edit) (Mar 29, 2006)
- I feel that it is mainly BECAUSE of the language used (in combination with the wild imagination), that this story works so well. In fact, it is the mix of the us of language and Eve Adorer's vivid fantasy, that make her stories what they are: top notch, highly erotic Girlifests...
JJ
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Icarium
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Feb 29, 2004 |
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Great! (9/10)
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Coruc
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Feb 9, 2004 |
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Very well done and well thought out. (10/10)
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gerda6969
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Feb 6, 2004 |
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I LOVE THE STORY ESPECIALLY THE THIRD AND FOURTH CHAPTERS. tHE CAGE IS TRULY DELICIOUSLY DIABOLICAL AND i WAS FORCED TO CUM JUST IMAGINING WHAT IT WOULD BE LIKE TO HAVE ALL THOSE FLIES CRAWLING OVER AND INTO MY SEX.CHAPTER 7 IS EXQUISITE WITH THE SPIKED CHAIR AND ENFORCED DRINKING OF 30 GIRLS' URINE.THE CONCEPT OF THEN HAVING TO DRINK HER OWN PISS(TIME AND TIME AGAIN?) IS SUBLIME ESPECIALLY WHEN THE LEVEL IS ABOVE HER EYES.MMMMMMM (10/10)
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jbowler65
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Jan 23, 2004 |
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Very enjoyable and imaginative. We also loved the extreme shoes and the cage. Very well done. (8/10)
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Grey Slayer
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Jan 22, 2004 |
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Enjoyable and original. I like the extreme shoes, very extreme clamps, and the cage. The girl-this and girl-that was annoying, until search/replace in the word processor removed them all. Worth reading. (8/10)
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bdsmbill
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Jan 19, 2004 |
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The constant use of "girl" does detract, but the imagination is wonderful. (8/10)
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Faibhar
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Jan 19, 2004 |
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Well written, albeit the first person rendering is a bit distracting...e.g., though tortured admittedly to the point of wearing down the protagonist's mind, she still has the hubris to remark on her own beauty. Huh?
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Eve Adorer
(Edit) (Oct 6, 2006)
- Thank you for the positive review.
The answer to 'Huh?' is, of course, the fact the story is in the past tense. Katrina is recalling from a future time. True to say, that that would not perhaps have been clear at the point where you commented. Again, thanks..
EA
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lex ludite
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Jan 18, 2004 |
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This revised version is truly an astounding piece of writing; even its imperfections work for it. Eve Adorer remains an enigma as far as I am concerned. On the one hand the author is a breathless girl creature, the essence of girliness, but the flip side shows someone with a tremendous interest and affinity for things mechanical as well as an imagination for torture and horror that goes beyond the pale. Couple this with the fact that each story has showed significant improvement in style and attention to detail while retaining its marvelous originality, and you have a writer with the potential to be the best in this field, hands down. (10/10)
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- Replied by:
lex ludite
(Edit) (Sep 30, 2004)
- Recently I stated that Harry Berg was in a class by himself. I have to revise that statement; move over Harry, you have company and its name is Eve Adorer.
Regardless of its flaws, I still think this epic deserves to be ranked up there with anything ever posted to this site. At times the twists and turns of this tale seem to defy logic and the ending is a bit of a shock, but the originality and force that the author brings to bear must be recognized. Eve Adorer, whoever or whatever you are, I salute you.
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Satan_Klaus
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Jan 16, 2004 |
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Torture that can only come from a truly wicked mind! The cage is breathtaking to say the least.
Still the author deserves the award for the most annoying usage of a single word; girl. It is funny for the first 20 times but it becomes incredibly annoying after having to read an entire page full of girl.
I would suggest using the effect more in moderation, start slowly and add a noticeable amount after every "training step". That way you use your language to emphasise the submission. (5/10)
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- Replied by:
Eve Adorer
(Edit) (Oct 6, 2006)
- Point taken. Thanks.
EA
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lilone2him
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Jan 16, 2004 |
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THIS STORY WAS GREAT.I LOVED THE PART WHER SHE WAS PUT IN THE CAGE.. I HAD AN EXPERIENCE OF BEING CAGED. (10/10)
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mistresscandy
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Jan 13, 2004 |
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the cage torture was just amazing, i cant believe anyone is that sick and twisted enough to think of something like that.. but, the girl-this, girl-that, my god.. Author.. what were you thinking? and i see that in almost all the stories I have read so far, it is really annoying and it kills the mood of your story. but other than that, great! :D (4/10)
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- Replied by:
Eve Adorer
(Edit) (Oct 6, 2006)
- Point taken. Thanks.
EA
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Jan 11, 2004 |
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The genre, the theme, the idea, girl/girl is always hot (10/10)
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julise
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Jan 11, 2004 |
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I agree with Boozeman. The girl chat was too much of an interference and I just couldn't get into the story. I understand the reason for the girl-this and girl-that, but it just doesnt' work. (5/10)
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- Replied by:
Eve Adorer
(Edit) (Oct 6, 2006)
- It seemed a good idea at the time. But, standing back, it was overdone! Point taken. Thanks.
EA
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| Reviewer:
Boozeman
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Jan 11, 2004 |
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Well, for my part I didn't like the story that much. All the girl-this and girl-that became really annoying. Otherwise the synopsis was lacking originality, except what comes to the cage. The cage part was pretty good, but it would've been better without that girl-chit-chat. (6/10)
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- Replied by:
LoversDelight82
(Edit) (Sep 21, 2004)
- In my opinion, there was entirely too much over-description of EVERYTHING, especially the shoes. I bacame lost so many times, that I gave up trying to read certain parts. Also, "girly" this, and "girl" that is one of the most distracting and annoying things I have ever read. If this were an essay, I'd give it a c+ for effort, but overall, this story was horrible, and ought to be rewritten by someone who can write.
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Eve Adorer
(Edit) (Oct 6, 2006)
- Lover'sDelight must have seen my college reports!
'Girl' was undoubtedly overdone. It seemed a good idea at the time. It clearly wasn't. See that now: did not see it then. Thanks for your comment. The point is taken.
EA
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