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Tom and Joyce - The Early Years
Author: Lex Ludite
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(Added on Dec 30, 2003)
(This month 12784 readers) (Total 25030 readers) |
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This is the initial section of a multipart tribute to my favorite television rerun. Can a slightly masochistic and extremely submissive girl who comes from a decidedly dysfunctional family cope with college life? Enjoy the fun as she and her pimp-mentor,the ever resourceful Tom, take a bizarre turn around campus; meeting sex crazed frat boys, swinging senior citizens,off the wall nerds and the ever popular sorority lesbian population in their weird and wonderful odyssey. |
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Feb 11, 2005 |
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very well done and YES it is a spoof (9/10)
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- Replied by:
lex ludite
(Edit) (Feb 12, 2005)
- Of all the stories I have written, this generated the most animosity. I was practically lynched by the right to lifers based on incorrect claims by one of the airheads that frequents this site. I am astonished at the flak I receive anytime I attempt to post a spoof. I just don't understand some of the folks that seem to treat all this fantasy that is generated on this site as truth or something that should be revered. I write fiction, and so do the great majority of the other folk who post on this site. In passing your review and rating are very much appreciated, but as far as I am concerned, this one was still born, and never had a chance to develop. For that reason I have begun rewriting it under the title of Tim and Jill - The Beginning. I wonder how long it will take for the politically correct among us to start lighting their torches and marching in my direction once more?
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teamster
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Mar 11, 2004 |
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too bad for you that real women arent nearly this mindless. maybe you could have your girlfriend lobotomized.... (6/10)
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- Replied by:
lex ludite
(Edit) (Mar 12, 2004)
- You have a very strange sense of humor. Do I detect some degree of sarcasm in your remarks? Why do I bother writing a synopsis when evidently no one bothers to read it? THIS IS A SPOOF! I REPEAT, THIS IS A SPOOF! However, it would be most uncivilized of me if I did not thank you profusely for being the only person yet to review this little spoof.
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