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Kit
Author: kemosabe
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(Added on Dec 24, 2003)
(This month 31594 readers) (Total 60265 readers) |
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A beautiful model explores the world of S/M and finds herself. |
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Average (?):  (7/10) |
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Jan 23, 2009 |
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great them and story (9/10)
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- Replied by:
kemosabe
(Edit) (Jan 23, 2009)
- Thanks! Coming from you, I'm very grateful
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| Reviewer:
bigcat
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Feb 2, 2006 |
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Well done. Yes, somewhat perfunctory in parts and outside the bounds of reality, but it IS an erotic fantasy. Go for it. Anything that you think works. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
Nuditarian
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Apr 7, 2004 |
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Enjoyed this story. Hope you do more with Kit. (8/10)
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| Reviewer:
amberbamber
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Jan 8, 2004 |
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Good story.
I thought there was supposed to be bestiality? (6/10)
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| Reviewer:
Curtis
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Jan 5, 2004 |
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Interestingly, I find this story puts me much in mind of lex's stories. There is originality in the set-up, though not in the details of her ordeal. I agree that the author's take on prevention of sexual disease transmission is...a little flaky, but I'm assuming the people she runs into on her jaunt around the block were plants (otherwise the cops would have picked her up before she finished). Even with that, it's hard to rationalize Dax's enthusiastic reaction to hearing that she'd never had an HIV test. In a group like this, with periodic $500 fees paid, extensive STD testing would be de rigour. It IS well written, though, and moderately hot. (7/10)
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- Replied by:
kemosabe
(Edit) (Jan 6, 2004)
- I'm beginning to wonder if everyone has read the same story I posted. No one liked the name "Dax" so, I guess I should have called him "Lex". The concern for protection against socially transmitted diseases rarely appears in any story I've read on this website (read "True Love" for example). After all, we are dealing in fantasies; not realistic situations. (Again, I suggest you read "True Love") Dax never expressed any question as to Kit's HIV test; I don't know where that one came from. I'm glad someone takes the time to read my posts, however.
- Replied by:
Curtis
(Edit) (Jan 18, 2004)
- Thank you for pointing that out. By the way, I gave "True Love" a '7'.
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| Reviewer:
Moggy
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Dec 31, 2003 |
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I must agree with Lex's comments, which I feel are all valid. However I rate this story higher because the BDSM action was sexy and the standard of writing was definitely above the average. It simply needs more work on the scenarios to make the story a little more original. (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
lex ludite
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Dec 25, 2003 |
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Let me say it right out front, this story lacks originality to the max. The characters sound as if they were produced by a cookie cutter. I think the model must have at least one , perhaps two more holes in her head than normal. Her instant acceptance of the fact that she is a born submissive, based on the opinions of Dax,(now there is an original name), strains my credibility. The idea of unprotected sex with bums off the street not to mention the neighborhood homies, or whoever they are, means this woman and her masters must be idiots. Now I'm expected to believe that she's about to become a professional pain slut and stay intact as a top model. I won't buy that yellow brick either. I've read and enjoyed many of your efforts, but this one just does not cut it. (4/10)
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- Replied by:
kemosabe
(Edit) (Dec 26, 2003)
- Tnanks, Lex for your erudite review. I'm certainly not in your class as an author, I realize, but realism is not present in any of the stories I've ever read on this web site.
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