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A Good Time for Victoria
Author: Bigmike
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(Added on Mar 6, 2001)
(This month 9123 readers) (Total 19619 readers) |
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Victoria goes for a getaway with her boyfriend and gets more that she bargained for. A very short story. |
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Weighed
Average (?):  (6/10) |
Average
Rating:  (6.5/10) |
Highest
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| Reviewer:
Ninva
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Nov 23, 2008 |
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I'm going to be brutally honest; I was hoping for the wife and the husband to gang up on our heroine. I would have enjoyed simply MORE of this story; it feels incomplete. (Albeit, the author did warn of brevity, breifness does not exclude completeness.) (6/10)
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| Reviewer:
Jonathan |
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Mar 20, 2001 |
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I liked the story, what there was of it. The idea of the trail of notes was erotic
but would have been more so if there had been a greater chance of Victoria
having been observed when walking to the barn naked. Also, why bring up
Rachel? It creates the expectation of some sort of three way confrontation that
never happens. It would have been nice if something unexpected had
happened to Victoria once she was bound and blindfolded, rather than the usual. (6/10)
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| Reviewer:
crazyfrenchmen |
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Mar 8, 2001 |
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Good start but the story needs a little more work as in length. What does the women feel, you could use a little flashback on what she experience there make her remember of past session or stuff like that.
keep up the good work! (7/10)
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