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Final Year Project
Author: Mike Haville
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(Added on Dec 14, 2003)
(This month 15072 readers) (Total 23147 readers) |
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A fashion student designs an innovative bondage outfit, which converts from zero to total bondage with everything in between. |
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Average (?):  (7/10) |
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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May 4, 2005 |
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nicely done (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
bracemaiden
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Jan 15, 2004 |
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Some parts seemed slow going, such as the big concern about grades and marketing. Other parts seemed quite rushed, like the bondage possibilities at the end. I think that more text about Dor's feelings of being in the outfit would bring about more enjoyment for the reader. (7/10)
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| Reviewer:
Cleo671
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Jan 1, 2004 |
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I liked the visual element accompanying the story, although I don't think it's necessary sometimes to have an 'introductory' paragraph, a synopsis isn't required when a story is finished and submitted. The introductory paragraph,the information about the characters, could have been incorporated within the story in the beginning.
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| Reviewer:
Master_chris
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Dec 15, 2003 |
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great Story, I think that some of the bits in the story was slow going, but overall it was a good read. (6/10)
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