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Mutual Suicide Machine
Author: John Lubber
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(Added on Dec 14, 2003)
(This month 12019 readers) (Total 20213 readers) |
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This is a story of a suicidal man who finds a like minded woman for a wonderful adventure as they make love and plan the final event. |
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Average (?):  (7/10) |
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| Reviewer:
kaeiria
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Oct 6, 2004 |
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just didn't make it for me (4/10)
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| Reviewer:
Cleo671
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Jan 1, 2004 |
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8 stars, because of the way it's written, the description and expression as seen through the male character is what did it for me.
I noticed that all your stories feature snuff, and that intrigues me. I always read new stories, usually I'll slant toward stories that feature the interplay between two people. This one attracted me because of the 'suicide' element, and that subject area (not necessarily in relation to snuff) has been a subject that has been a mystery to me.
In this story, what got me the most?
The very last line, 'I wanted to........'
This line reinforces the 'finality' of what has taken place in the story.
(8/10)
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| Reviewer:
BDSM_Tourguide
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Dec 16, 2003 |
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Maccabre. Good story, but a note to the author: PLease take the time to spell out words like inches and pounds. The abbreviations worked will with the tone of this story, but in another, they might not lend well. (6/10)
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| Reviewer:
grlboundndesire
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Dec 15, 2003 |
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Would love to see more stories from this author. (9/10)
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| Reviewer:
mkemse
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Dec 14, 2003 |
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Next time please choose another subject matter, suicide is nothing to use for a story line (6/10)
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- Replied by:
CoffinNail
(Edit) (Dec 14, 2003)
- Sure it is--if rape is, if forced domination of other human beings is, if snuff is, if modification and dehumanization of unwilling victims is, if whipping and piercing and torture are good fodder for fiction, why not suicide? Fact is, the story is clearly marked, no way you could wander in by accident and not know what the subject matter was. So why use this, of all arenas, to push your personal ideas of what is and isn't "proper" subject matter?
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| Reviewer:
fetish101
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Dec 14, 2003 |
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I don't usually read snuff stories, but this one caught my attention in the first two paragraphs because I actually believed this was something the character wanted to do. I was real to the point of freaking me out. Good Job. (8/10)
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